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Butterfly on the Wind
2009-11-11 . chapter 1
Very sweet. Keep up the good work.
senkoed
2009-09-17 . chapter 1
so sweet.
i can so imagine snape doing that for his daughter. it's a classic dad thing. i'm-too-mature-for-it-but-i'll-think-of-an-excuse-if-my-daughter-wants-to-go
my dad pulled that too, when i was younger.
the sequence flows tightly, yet at a gentle pace, so i like. =D
Mother of Tears
2008-09-22 . chapter 1
I really liked this one.
mom2divas
2008-09-03 . chapter 1
Loved it! Laughed the whole way through!
Romulus
2008-08-25 . chapter 1
Aww...
So they did have children after some time. Good. I hope the second one is a boy. Rosie would love him.
The Queen of Confusion
2008-08-21 . chapter 1
Great little story!! Glad to see they got some happyness!

SARAH
excessivelyperky
2008-07-18 . chapter 1
Yes, I can hear the two teachers now, "you wouldn't believe what that idiot tried to do late one afternoon" and "you ought to see _my_ paperwork for those morons in administration, I ask you, when am I supposed to actually _teach" and 'Athletics! Waste of time, but do they ever listen to me?' (I'm married to a chemistry teacher, and I know a lot of them).

Lovely balloon, too.
Rhyselle
2008-07-16 . chapter 1
After all the angst in your epic tales, these lovely little bits of fluff and joy are so much fun to read.

I recall one night when my husband and I fell asleep with our balloons floating up by the ceiling of our bedroom. *grin* Thanks for bringing back a good memory!

Lovely tale!
sqHPfan
2008-07-16 . chapter 1
what a relief imagining this scene after the events in the Book of the Dead; you do give me hope, because your other stand alone chapter (No door) is positively frightening. so there is a happy ending with a baby for the Book of the Dead? thank goodness, now I can sleep at night. I love these one shots Especially when they are sweet), they give me a glimpse into their lives, for better or for worse.
duj
2008-07-16 . chapter 1
So they do get a happy ending after all. It was sweet of her to get him a Slytherin balloon.
Laurenke1
2008-07-15 . chapter 1
Very cute

I thank you for sharing
notwritten
2008-07-14 . chapter 1
You have written a very interesting, and cool chapter. Have a cool day tomorrow. So keep smiling. :-) Update please.
eac-dudette
2008-07-14 . chapter 1
aw that was adorable!
whitehound
2008-07-14 . chapter 1
It's sweet, but it's a very American carousel. Maybe it's an import. Traditional British ones are all or nearly all horses, all of the same pattern, very stylised and covered in raised gold ribbons and leaves, with very occasionally a cockeral pulling a carriage for those who prefer to sit on a bench. Only little kiddie-sized ones that seat six-year-olds have exotics like elepahnts on them.
Marble Meadow
2008-07-14 . chapter 1
AW!

Sweetest thing EVER!

I LOVED THIS. Absolutely and unequivocally adored it.

What a wonderful thing to write.

Thanks for putting a smile on my face Juno.

Marble Meadow
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