 senkoed 2009-09-17 . chapter 1so sweet.
i can so imagine snape doing that for his daughter. it's a classic dad thing. i'm-too-mature-for-it-but-i'll-think-of-an-excuse-if-my-daughter-wants-to-go
my dad pulled that too, when i was younger.
the sequence flows tightly, yet at a gentle pace, so i like. =D |
 Mother of Tears 2008-09-22 . chapter 1I really liked this one. |
 mom2divas 2008-09-03 . chapter 1Loved it! Laughed the whole way through! |
 Romulus 2008-08-25 . chapter 1 Aww...
So they did have children after some time. Good. I hope the second one is a boy. Rosie would love him. |
 The Queen of Confusion 2008-08-21 . chapter 1Great little story!! Glad to see they got some happyness!
SARAH |
 excessivelyperky 2008-07-18 . chapter 1Yes, I can hear the two teachers now, "you wouldn't believe what that idiot tried to do late one afternoon" and "you ought to see _my_ paperwork for those morons in administration, I ask you, when am I supposed to actually _teach" and 'Athletics! Waste of time, but do they ever listen to me?' (I'm married to a chemistry teacher, and I know a lot of them).
Lovely balloon, too. |
 Rhyselle 2008-07-16 . chapter 1After all the angst in your epic tales, these lovely little bits of fluff and joy are so much fun to read.
I recall one night when my husband and I fell asleep with our balloons floating up by the ceiling of our bedroom. *grin* Thanks for bringing back a good memory!
Lovely tale! |
 sqHPfan 2008-07-16 . chapter 1what a relief imagining this scene after the events in the Book of the Dead; you do give me hope, because your other stand alone chapter (No door) is positively frightening. so there is a happy ending with a baby for the Book of the Dead? thank goodness, now I can sleep at night. I love these one shots Especially when they are sweet), they give me a glimpse into their lives, for better or for worse. |
 duj 2008-07-16 . chapter 1So they do get a happy ending after all. It was sweet of her to get him a Slytherin balloon. |
 Laurenke1 2008-07-15 . chapter 1Very cute
I thank you for sharing |
 notwritten 2008-07-14 . chapter 1You have written a very interesting, and cool chapter. Have a cool day tomorrow. So keep smiling. :-) Update please. |
 eac-dudette 2008-07-14 . chapter 1aw that was adorable! |
 whitehound 2008-07-14 . chapter 1It's sweet, but it's a very American carousel. Maybe it's an import. Traditional British ones are all or nearly all horses, all of the same pattern, very stylised and covered in raised gold ribbons and leaves, with very occasionally a cockeral pulling a carriage for those who prefer to sit on a bench. Only little kiddie-sized ones that seat six-year-olds have exotics like elepahnts on them. |
 Marble Meadow 2008-07-14 . chapter 1AW!
Sweetest thing EVER!
I LOVED THIS. Absolutely and unequivocally adored it.
What a wonderful thing to write.
Thanks for putting a smile on my face Juno.
Marble Meadow |
 Linnorria 2008-07-14 . chapter 1*grins* Severus Snape holding a balloon! That is at the same time the one of the most ridiculous and sweetest images I've ever read! simply beautiful.
And I'm glad to see there is some hope they will survive throughout this next story you're writing as well. |