Oh my GOD, how HORRIBLE! Well written

Who did this?! Oh I hope they get out of there alrigt. Well I guess I know that already, because of candyfloss.
Great start! Hope to see more soon!

SARAH

Hm. Thinking. Severus and Hermione captured by those @$#^%! madmen from the church. This time together. For a long time. OMG. With a little one, perhaps conceived in captivity?, on the way. Please, please I MUST know more. Will they live? Please don't kill them off!

Where on earth could they be? And who put them there? And how long has it been? What will happen to their daughter?

I have tons of questions!
Beth

I bet that Snape is starving himself for Hermione and the little girl that might never be, too.

Oh! *eyes widen* This was... *shiver*

It made a huge impression on me... but the words to describe it aren't coming.

Wow.

Ominous. Considering how long it took them to find Hermione the first time she was locked away, the signs aren't good.

Oh very nice

a new story, not a happy one then

You have written a very interesting, and cool chapter. Have a cool day tomorrow. So keep smiling. :-) Update please.

That would have to be very alarming for Hermione after being shut in the convent, and for him after being in Azkaban.

Looks like they are between a rock and a hard place. Not bad I'm looking forward to seeing how they get out of this mess!

trapped...and no door.

when i think about that, it would really be weird, to be trapped in a room w/ no door.

This one gave me the creeps and a rather powerful shiver. I'm sad for them...and for the little girl that might not be...now that there isn't enough food.

Ahh. They need to escape! They need a door!

Marble Meadow

This was interesting, and even though I really didn't know what was going on (i.e. where they were etc), it was really well written. I loved that you included a piece about their would be daughter. Good job!

Hm, looks like you've been a busy beaver this weekend! Can't wait to go read the rest. But no update for Book of the Dead. Sneaky!! (Can't wait to see how this ties in with BOTD.)

Karen