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Elodie Wolfe
2009-05-14 . chapter 5
That was amazing. This and the one where he doesn't know her are my absolute favorites. Absolutely perfect, and extremely well written! I'm looking forward to more Pepper/Tony from you. :D
Elodie~
SushiandPickles
2008-11-01 . chapter 3
This one was my favourite, so much raw emotion, absolutely adored it!

Loved the others though!

:D
seren23
2008-10-17 . chapter 5
Hot. Seriously. Way hot. These were amazing. I loved each of them. That last one, the voices were so perfectly spot on. Just awesome.
Argent
2008-10-07 . chapter 5
yub. blushing and mushing. Thank you
Ori1
2008-07-23 . chapter 4
Wow. Cyber brain sex is now my new kink. I don't know much about the comic book canon so I am assuming that it is based on that but I enjoyed this different look at how their sexual relationship could have begun.
Ori1
2008-07-23 . chapter 2
This is the hottest fic of this collection. Jaw dropping and other things good. I hope you add more to this story because I loved it I want to know more. When does it occur? I am assuming pre-Afghanistan. And then Pepper (is she Pepper in this story or is she Virginia or Ginny or someone else) what is her story? Is she a model, a business woman, an artist? I love how she is just as in charge of herself as Stark is.
Do they meet again? I kind of hope so since they need to have sex at her place, his place, his yacht, his plane (come on stripper pole) all the foreign capitals of the world, major holiday sex, etc.
I highly enjoyed this story.
Ori1
2008-07-23 . chapter 1
This is possibly the sweetest piece of fanfiction in the Iron Man section. I love how you portray the Tony who hasn't lost his parents.
I also like the idea that Tony and Pepper still would end up together no matter what.
Thanks for the cute story.
Miranda River
2008-07-19 . chapter 1
This story-though it seems more like a collection of one-shots, but for the sake of the sentence I'll call this a story-is amazing and I absolutely adore it! I love all of your manifestations of Pepper and Tony and how each one is different. Every chapter has the possibility of being a part of a bigger story and that takes real talent. Keep up the good work!
Countess Verona Dracula
2008-07-17 . chapter 5
Wow... I loved this last installment. You have not only perfectly captured Pepper and Tony, but the essence of a *real* relationship; it's messy and a little cliched and equal parts total lust and complete love, and I loved every word of it. Bravo!

~ Verona
AES13
2008-07-17 . chapter 5
That was fantastic! I love seeing into Tony's constantly churning thoughts, all the little asides, and the casual list of all the hell they must have been through together. (The sex wasn't bad either...;-) ) Great job!
tamasit1
2008-07-17 . chapter 5
Good god, that was so hot. I really love how you capture Tony. I was cracking up when you had him go on and on about the Altoids. his brain just works on overtime at the weirdest moments,lol. I really hope you intend to start another story or another series of one shots. These all were so amazing. Oh and the whole 'Hi' thing, very sweet and very sexy.
lizard0979
2008-07-17 . chapter 5
I read all 5 chapters at once and loved the first 4. I don't even have words to describe the perfection of chapter 5. I like that Pepper waited for him to get his stuff together before loving him.
Sare Liz
2008-07-16 . chapter 4
That was really beautiful. ...and my apologies for missing the warning on chapter three ::blushes:: Normally I'm a bit more attentive to that sort of thing. Thank you for writing, and I look forward to the final place/chapter.
Quicksilvermad
2008-07-16 . chapter 4
Hot damn...

Extremis is my favorite collection (Adi Granov is a brilliant artist) and this...

Beautiful.
Countess Verona Dracula
2008-07-16 . chapter 1
Wow, I really liked this! It seems to be a younger Pepper and Tony, in a time when things were less complicated. Plus it's just interestng to have some AU around here. Sweet and funny - good job!

~ Verona
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