AGH! MORE! MORE! I MUST HAVE MORE!

*cough* Ahem...

Aw, poor Kaoru! *huggles the twins*

And what's Haruhi's big news?

Can't wait for the next chapter!

Please, please, please, please... (etc) continue this!

I am loving the story with the none-too-innocent touches, and the twincest and the...

Please!

I love your work and would be so happy if you continued this!

Wow this is the second story I read of you and all I can say is wow...I too am a yaoi fan. I simply love the MoriHun and HikaKao (but I do have a preference for the HikaKao) I am definitively putting you in my authors and story alert! You just have to continue writing!

Clif-hanger so unfair

Hey, I want Renge in the story! She's like my favorite character and I ADORE her and Kyoya...

Aw, I want a conveniently placed water too! (I laughed so hard... 'coz it's true, all the wtaer in Animes is always so convenient)

ZOMG, not... (drum roll) SERIOUS?! lol.

Can't wait!

this is a good story so far, even though it doesnt have my favorite pairing. i really want to know why honey was disowned so please post again soon.

i loved this so far 8D i'm not that into Morihunny but man i love everything else XD! really, i mean, HikaKao makes my day and omg i have been wondering if someone would use KyouRenge haha, it isn't like my fav pairing but i was just curious about it in a fic

:O WHAT?! DISOWNED?! NO! Why Honey, WHY?! How did that happen?! I wonder what he did... I can't wait to find out!

OMG, my review for the second chappie got cut off MAJORLY. I'm so sorry about that. I dunno what happened, and I don't remember all the junk I've typed on there. ._.
--Kyouya sighed a little, there went his plan of getting the cake for free, but a discount was nice too.-- That just made my day. ^^
Yay for fanservice and HikaKao! I loved the little HikaKao scene. Oh, so cute! >w<
Wow, love the little twist at the end. Hunny... disowned by his own family? Say it isn't so! D: Poor Hunny. ;3;

~ MM

I like this story and the fact that you have Kyouya and Renge is great I like this so much I put you in my favorite author.

Aw! Kaoru took a nap on Hikaru! ^^ How cute!

Ah Honey... Still a little bundle of joy, huh? :3 I think it's cute that Honey and Mori made a pastry shop together. After all, Honey did like sweets. :)

Haruhi is so different! I can picture her in my head, and she's adorable.

Tamaki... still using corners huh? Sad, isn't it? xD

The last part of the chappie was... O.O Wow. I don't wanna even think about that.

I'm fine with the KyouyaxRenge pairing. I think it ok. :) Keep up the good work!

-Chub

Aw, protective Hikaru! I love it!

O! That was great! ^^ Yay for TamaHaru! Woo! :D So Hunny qand Mori are making pastries for a meal with Mori's family? Hmm... I wonder what that's about. >:) Yay! The twins still live together! ^^

UPDATE SOON
Kidding, kidding. I just couldn't resist. ._. Call me a meanie? xD
Okay, serious business time.
-And why didn’t he just come visit her if he wanted to see her so badly. -- Since it's supposed to be a question (but with it being a dependant clause, it's sort of confusing), it should have a question mark at the end.
-“Moshi Moshi.” Haruhi answered, finishing up the last question on her homework before closing her book. -- I believe after "Moshi Moshi," it should have a coma instead of a period.
-“I know! But your voice, it’s a song that I can never get out of my head and I need to hear it over and over again” -- There should be a period at the end.
There were a few other mistakes I saw, but those pretty much correlate to the second mistake. Other than those small, grammatical errors, I didn't really see any other mistakes. Spelling looks okay, sentence structure looks okay, and the overall fic is just awesome. :3
Um, so far it's really interesting. I'm really liking it so far. >w<

Lol, the twins laughing at Kyouya getting married? They are pure evil. xD

~ MM