love it

Good job, I cannot wait to see how this will play out!

you should updat this is really good.

That was good cant wait till Tristan comes in. Update soon please :]

Great story

continue please !!=)

ok i liked it.

soo i say keep on going!

normally i dont read troy fictions, but this sounded interesting so i thoud that i would give it a shot. but please contiunue this, i like very much, update soon. then i have an qeustion. how can colin be rorys brother if lore had her at 16, bc colin is two years older than her, then that dosnt make sences. please continue

I would definitely love to read more.
Very good, intriguing start.

I think it'll be interesting to see where this story is going. I do hope your chapters will be longer though. Also you do need a beta, and if you have one then just make sure you read the chapters before you post. It's only little things, extra words or somehting like that. But every mistake causes a reader to loose interest in the story. Good luck.

iNTERESTING CONCEPT, i CANNOT WIAT TO READ MORE.