Great job. I enjoyed it. A little predictable, but overall, very enjoyable.

aww, that was cute!

Even though it's a bit shorter than it usually is, this chapter really cleared things up and gave more insight to Sam's intentions to their newfound relationship. It really brought the story together. Great descriptions and good job in describing House's personality.
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ooh, yummy goodness!
u rushed with Sam's conversation with Wilson and I think that's mostly why it seemed so short. Also, I think House and Sam are rushing into a relationship a bit too fast after her Mother's death, not enough time to think everything through like House usually does. But, it is a good story and chapter over all. Can't wait to see what happens!
Update soon!

I really like this story. Sam is an interesting character. I can't wait to read more.

This was a good chapter! I think you're portraying House pretty well, considering his personality and you're describing the situation very well.
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Good chapter! I thought you did the news article and report about her mother very well!
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Good chapter!

I think it could use just a bit more detail,though, it just makes the chapter look short when the paragraphs are so short and the most one paragraph is is two barely two lines. It probably looks different with word or the other writing programs, so you have to be careful when transferring. It's really good, though! It's really good so keep it up!

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sweet, I wonder what news was brought to Sam?
Update son!

It's a good story with lots of potential, though I think the ending was a little rushed. Update soon!