It's short and sweet. I like it.

(I thought you were too ** yourself with the 'Fail! Epic fail!' thing).

You're right there must be more Aanji fics.

That was cute...I like it.

Aw, that was cute. I despise Zutara, of course, but the Aanji was great. Loved it and while the ending was a little abrupt, it was nicely executed. I enjoyed the read overall.

it was an excellent story but yes the ending was lacking not trying to flame or be mean, just saying it didn't make much sense at the end, though it did to you. endings can be difficult sometimes.

they lie floss kills. -grips teeth with the hand of life-

'ears had rolled by like dust, smoky and quick.' that line. i love that line. its perfect, crisp and it owns my attention. and with that line, you've stab me in my heart and pulled me in. i read on.

oh. oh. courtney

i - have to look for sex hair. lalala. but meanwhile. i love this, i love it alotta. though i'm unsure about this pairing, i really liked how you wrote On Ji.

and the detail muy bien.

FIRE LORD ZUKO! AVATAR KUZON! AANJI.

I love this! I don't know why you're not satisfied! God, your description of Zuko made me melt. With his softened face and more benificent rule - OH. OH. AND ZUTARA. CAN'T FORGET KATARA. SHE OWNS FIRE NATION GIRLS'S FACES. Damn straight.

God, this was amazing. I loved reading about On Ji dancing on her own in the cave. Again, you've carried out another prompt magnificently. AND AHH! When Aang showed up, I squealed a little inside. xDD And it made me grin that she didn't recognize him for a moment. That was great. And OH SOKKA - him and his sword shops. *love*

THIS DOES NOT FAIL. You win. I love it. *adores*

[[SUKI]]