I love watching doctors. and the Hollins
I love Jimmi and Cherry

Aww what a cute story you did well with it even though it is your first doctor fanfic. I love the way Melody yelled at Nick even though he did kind of desive it after what he said to her and the fact that George has no clue what was happeneing even though all she knew was there was yelling which could scare the patients away but it would of been funny if she did I might do that with my story but it is not Melody that is doing the yelling it is another doctor but I won't tell you which one you will have the read the story to find out (lol).
Till Next Time

Aww love it. Is this just a one shot or will there be more?

Keep it up.

x

Hi!

Cool story - you write very well! It's also the first Doctors one I've found!

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