 MetalChickCrisis2040 2008-07-23 . chapter 11OH! I love Kim Possible more now! Lol. I miss watching it...and now I just need too... And i need to add this to my alert! so interested!
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And dudette, I can't text!! OMGosh!! I have no mins!! ='[ ohohoh...and we should try and see the new X-Files movie this weekend! |
 Heart-san's wolf 2008-07-20 . chapter 9Y'know...im not trying to be rude but...if this is kim/ron pairing...why is it on the kim/shego section...agin not trying to be rude hust asking a question. |
 Donteatacowman 2008-07-20 . chapter 9Ooh, more suspense... Kim is attracted to Ian, but is there actually anything there? Will she act on her still lingering love for Ron, or put it behind her? And will Ron get smart and break up with Bonnie? Plus some more action towards the end. You're good at building up emotions but keeping the story moving. |
 Donteatacowman 2008-07-19 . chapter 8Gasp! Ron/Kim shipping! If Ron knew what was right for him, he'd break off the engagement with Bonnie ASAP. But will he?
Thanks for updating, but word to the wise: Don't update more often than once a day. That way, the story will stay at on the front page of the KP fanfics for more time and thereby bring more readers. Kind of "playing hard to get", but for readers, not romantic interests! |
 Donteatacowman 2008-07-18 . chapter 7Hmm, seems a little more likely that Ron will come to his senses and leave Bonnie, especially after we saw how she treated Rufus (although Ron laughed it off). Will Kim be okay? What will Shego do? Hope to find out in your next update. |
 Donteatacowman 2008-07-18 . chapter 6Another good chapter... Will Kim get back with Ron, or hook up with Ian? It's looking like the latter to me... |
 Francheska 2008-07-18 . chapter 6 i am really gettin into the story! I wonder what Shego is up to... |
 Danielle 2008-07-18 . chapter 5 wow i luv this story! I love how u update frequently. Keep up the good work! |
 Donteatacowman 2008-07-17 . chapter 4Ron and Bonnie... engaged!?! Can't wait to hear the back story behind this one. |
 Donteatacowman 2008-07-17 . chapter 3Another cool chapter; began with some choppy grammar but got better as it went on. Waiting expectantly for the next chapter... |
 ZukoFan01-SoweluFan02 2008-07-16 . chapter 1wow, i dont mean to be rude freewheeler26, because i'm not a rude person, but it just bothers me how wrong you were with the story plot. dont mean to put in spoilers out there or anything, but you were at least wrong about most of the stuff that you wrote... it's okay though because its not your story... its mine... |
 freewheeler26 2008-07-16 . chapter 2 sigh...your not a bad writer but i think its a little predictable,Kim will join the organization and fight Shego fall in love with Ron who is head of this organization and continue fighting the good fight...blah,blah,blah unfortunately these type of stories are a dime a dozen rare is the story that is actually different and good. stories like Kim being a bad person from the beginning but is Mascurading as a goody,goody or really something like oh her being a vampire like a pure blood as in vampire knight if you watched it or Hellsing not a chipped vampire but a true vampire perhaps sired by alucard after seruna you should watch it if you haven't. just in case you haven't both are japanes anime. anyhow since i'm not the author please continue writing the predictable story. |
 CajunBear73 2008-07-16 . chapter 2Very interesting... Such the situation Kim is in and now the secrecy at getting her back in the saddle against Shego.
Blonde, huh? Seemed somewhat familiar to her, but what threw her was how unlike he behaved to anything that seemed familiar to her.
Well, it's off to see that wizard. Parents on the line too. |
 Donteatacowman 2008-07-16 . chapter 2Nice chapter. The message thing reminded me of the Incredibles- complete with self-destruct mode. From your description, it would seem the blond is Ron; if so, I am definitely intrigued. Can't wait to see what happens at eight o'clock! |
 Donteatacowman 2008-07-14 . chapter 1Good start, but some questions that I assume will soon be answered; going by your summary, I'd say your story has promise. Keep on trucking... or writing... or whatever. Good luck! |