Love the whole story so far. Hope you keep witting more of it. I like the issues that Jeice is gettin' in.

BWAHAHAHA!! Ginyu is totally channelling Mad-Eye. I got this mental image of the Cap'n with Moody's eyeball spinning around in his socket. … As if he wasn't scary enough! XD

*snickers* Love the bedtime story title, too. "Snow White and the Seven Pirates who Ran her through and Plundered her Gold."

And OMG! I almost broke something laughing over the Ginyu crew's description of Zarbon's hair! XD
Guldo: A sweet-smelling dream
Jeice: Roses and springtime dew
Burter: A soft summer breeze
Recoome: The rich opulent essence of ruby Jasmine and lotus flower.
Priceless!

I was thoroughly surprised by the quality of writing and wit in this story. The way you portray each character is more than entertaining, it's simply genius. Not a single character is one-dimensional, each has his/her own depth. Enjoying it very much and the unraveling mystery. Please continue soon.

Incredible! Hilarious! Piratey! I love Jeice, he's so funny. Zarbon is just plain sex. Love how you write them all! UPDATE

I can imagine how it's going to turn out with a wolf teaching Jeice. Please update soon.

Saku. Teaching Jeice. How to talk to women.

Caithion: It will all end badly, mark my words.

...it's needless to say that I can't wait for the next installment, but I just said it so that point is moot.

Oh my gosh, finally!
It's good to read another chapter, and again, it was epic win! I'm really starting to like Caithion, he's so mysterious and cocky! I also like the princess, hehe, she's full of fire! Poor Captain Ginyu seems to hate her! XD
I really hope you continue soon, I wanna see Jeice tryin' to be romantic! That's awesome, damnit!

Gee, finally!
This chapter was just awesome, I love Jeice! Please continue soon! =)

Hey!
Lol, this chapter is epic win! I can definitely see that happening to Jeice! As eager as a little boy, and then, he gets turned down! Oh, brother!

"I am the Captain here, I do all the shouting!"

I could read this line over and over again without getting tired of it! Ginyu and that princess seem to be meant for each other! xD
Please update soon, we all can't wait to read more!

O.O

OK, if you don't upload a new chapter of this story, I'm going to kill everyone in my neighborhood, eat my dog's head and then pull a bullet in my brain while jumping in the nearest river.

PLEASE UPDATE! I love the Ginyu-Force! (falls to your knees)

please update soon. can't wait to read more!

YAY! A Ginyu-Force story! They are by far my favorite characters, but sadly, almost no-one writes about them... you rock!

I like your idea. I've always pictured the GF a little more serious than in the show. My favorites are Burter and Jeice, and there is one thing I wanna say:

Jeice needs a girl. Badly. Look at the way he acts XD

Please update VERY VERY VERY VERY VERY VERY VERY VERY VERY VERY VERY VERY... (2 hours later)... VERY soon! :)

Hey there!
Your story sounds pretty interesting, I (or better we) would like to know how it continues...
Sorry for my english, I'm from Sweden...

And the plot thickens. Can't wait to read more!

I haven't been a fan of DBZ for years, but this is really fun. I like the story already. ^^