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| Gaurdian Of The Gateways 2008-08-06 ch 3,  | abuseALIENS?!?!?!? Ha, that Chiro! Their alarm is annoying! Now then...UPDATE SOON! |
| Gaurdian Of The Gateways 2008-08-06 ch 2, | abuseAh! Why must you write awesome chapters? Update Soon |
| Gaurdian Of The Gateways 2008-08-06 ch 1, | abuse...WOW! AWESOME START! You better continue the story! |
| Demonata 2008-07-30 ch 3, | abuseJust a bit rushed, but nothing really big. Anway- Puppet: Cool, I came in again Me: Aw, why did you have to come Puppet: Cuz I feel like it! Me: *rolls eyes* Anyway, Update Soon |
| Demonata 2008-07-30 ch 2, | abuseo Puppet: I HOPE MANDARIN DIES! Me: Could you stop that! It's me reviewing not you! Puppet: *whacks her in the back of the head* Anyway update soon Me: *mumbles I hate you to Puppet Puppet: Suck it up! |
| Demonata 2008-07-30 ch 1, | abusewow! cool start! |
| SkeletonSlayer13 2008-07-27 ch 3, | abuseOMM! (Oh My Monkey!!) THAT WAS AN AWESOME CHAPTER. Yes just a little rushed but, everyone rushes once in a while. Can't wait for more! ...I'm serious, UPDATE SON! |
| KnucklesRedFury207.2 2008-07-25 ch 3, | abusei can't wait to read more!! hope that next chappie gets put up soon!! |
| SkeletonSlayer13 2008-07-23 ch 2, | abuseYAY! another chapter down! can't wait for more! I hope you kill Mandarin in your story (you know i hate him). |
| KnucklesRedFury207.2 2008-07-20 ch 2, | abuseHOLY CRAP!! I LOVED THIS! I HOPE YOU UPDATE AGAIN REAL SOON! ! |
| MimiSweet4 2008-07-19 ch 2, | abuseOMG... That was an awesome read!! WO! |
| ElasticPoodle 2008-07-15 ch 1, | abuseI could only find one flaw with this chapter: "Chiro had her raven black while he had his blue eyes from his father" should be: "Chiro had her raven black HAIR, while he had his blue eyes from his father" but other than that I found nothing wrong with it, it is thoroly enjoyable and (eyes go wide) Is that a ball of yarn? (starts playing with yarn) |
| SkeletonSlayer13 2008-07-14 ch 1, | abuseTHAT WAS NOT DUMB, THAT WAS AWESOME! I want yarn, can i please have some yarn? can't wait for more-of the story not the yarn Update Soon |
| KnucklesRedFury207.2 2008-07-14 ch 1, | abusecan't wait to read more! |