 Chihiro Inuzuka 2009-08-22 . chapter 2MORE PLEASE! |
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 Blue-shine-angel 2009-03-05 . chapter 2PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE UPDATE SOON I REALLY REALLY REALLy WANT TO KNOW WHAT WILL HaPPEN NEXT it's been hard finding a good story to read and I came across yours so PLEASE PLEASE UPDATE SOON I REALLY REALLY WANT TO READ THE NEXT CHAPTER! |
 Inumaru12 2008-07-15 . chapter 2Yay! I love it! One thing though, i just noticed this.
Sakura looked up and noticed Naruto running down the dock. She noticed Hinata under his arm and pumped her fist. “and noticed Naruto running down the dock. She noticed Hinata under his arm and pumped her fist.
You repeated the same line. ^_^; It's all good though. Can't wait till you update again. Yay Tobi is win!! |
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