I really enjoyed this! I loved the family dynamics you captured and how each character is believable and thought-out.

Aw. I liked this a lot!

Haha, I loved this. It was great. :D Lol.

Angelica

cool story harry's char is very similar to that of arthur weasleys

that was sweet funny and awsome!

That is really cute and very true to character for Harry!

Aw, Little Albus Severus is living up to his namesake and becoming a Potions Master! Great one-shot. I love the interactions between Harry and his children. It all felt very natural.

Harry's "voice" sounds very weird here. Like some australian cowboy. Weird, I know! But I couldn't shake the feeling that how he talked to Albus, the words he used, seemed pretty un-natural for Harry.

I LOVE this! In really like the picture of Harry as a comforting, reassuring father that his kids can go to for help. And I know EXACTLY how Albus feels, too, especially the bit about choosing the wrong subjects stopping you from doing certain careers if you want to later on in life! Very realistic, and beautifully written, too.

I love it. Engaging and fascinating. Oh, did I mention, interesting, too?

cute, well done!!

“Oh, thank Merlin for that! I have a date this weekend…’

BANG!

“OW! Bollocks… bloody hell… what did you just say, young lady!”

By far the best bit in the story xD I loved this and I loved all of your characterisations. =3

Keep up the great work! =D

all i can do is smile...

This story was really well writeen, very entertaining. I love the next generation. Great grammar and all too.

Great story! I love the Next Gen, too! Keep up the great work!