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crazy cat lady
2008-09-08
ch 1, anon.
abuseonly murrey fic... ^ ^ good.
AlchemistM
2008-08-31
ch 1,
abuseBeautifully done. (:
Taangy
2008-08-15
ch 1,
abuseOh wow, you're good. ;D In the game, I always gave him money but he'd go and spend it at the bar. Then by the time he started stealing from me a ton, I grew to dislike the poor hobo. And now, here I am reading your story that brings him out as a human being with feelings rather than the drunk hobo. ^^ Good job!
KimmKatt
2008-07-28
ch 1, anon.
abuseOh my, oh my. This made me so sad. I love Murrey and I feel bad for him...that's why whenever he steals my food I let him keep it :( Thank you for writing this, I feel like writing about Murrey now.
Calypso Tea
2008-07-17
ch 1,
abuseWow! This was so sad. I feel so bad for Murrey...

And then I remember how he would steal from me, steal from the town; how there's even a scene where he gets enough money to finally go home and he comes back a day later having blown it all at the bar. And I remember that I can't stand him.

And then I re-read your story and instantly feel so bad for him again. What a vicious cycle you've caused! Seriously, though, awesome fic. ^_^
The Scarlet Sky
2008-07-15
ch 1,
abusePoor Murrey. D: I always gave him money, even though he'd waste it all at the bar each time.

Darn, Eko, you always bring out the depth in every character you pursue. Most people just dismiss Murrey, but you turn him into a living, breathing, human being. The only thing I'd ask is why doesn't Murrey mention his wife and kids? He's actually married down in Po-Po Valley. ;)

Anyway. Great work, and I'm shocked that you wrote in the dreaded AWL storyline. Haha.
HmGirly
2008-07-14
ch 1,
abuseEKO!
It was so... so sad. Admittedly, Murrey has always annoyed me like crazy - it's always been like... I give you money, you spend it drinking. No more money!
And now there's a reason.
And now I'll give him money every time I see him XD.
-applauds wildly-

Hannah x
Cookies Cream 'n Ice Cream
2008-07-14
ch 1,
abuseWow, just wow. This is definetely a different way of portraying Murrey, and you did it really well. I love how you made him so sad, because he doesn't seem like it in the games. Really well done!
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