wow.

i'm speechless. i think the ending could have been less disruptive but overall, i think it's powerfully dark and terribly delicious...

great job.

Oh, my god! This is so sad - I'm crying! I love this so much! You control so much with words - its just like the picture is there in front of me! Please please please please write more - this is fantastic!

OMGokay...that was strange. Nice story, really. Now on to Tom Felton..did I mention he's my pony?

You absolutely HAVE to continue this. I'm reading this TWO ENTIRE YEARS after it was written and it still hasn't been updated. You can't just stop there. I have to admit-I'm jealous. I couldn't write anything as complicated as this.

This is a SUPERB work of fiction

you need to polish off grammar and everything but the idea is very good and the ending was fantastic

you shouldn't write an epilouge but keep the readers hanging !

lol

This is really good! Post more soon!

is it the end?

Nice fic-it started out as cute and fun, and ended up with all the drama we could ever want. Continue soon? :)

yes! a draco/hermione fic that actually makes sense! a lot of sense! keep on writing!

very good! i like this...i like where it is going...please, come out w/ the next chapter soon...please!

awwww...but why did Draco become a Death Eater? Goes to show he didn't love Hermione more than anything, right? So Draco doesn't deserve Hermione's love. Anyway, this chapter was very angsty. But you killed Ron! *Stardust Firebolt bursts into tears* I hate you for doing that! LOL j/k. great story, you better put up a new chapter soon before I become dangerous *has an insane look in her eye* :)

awwww...you are SO good at changing the mood and the setting. The first chapter had a light, teasing tone to it, but now things get serious in Chapter 2. Good development of plot. The change is gradual, which makes the readers' emotions easier to flow with. I pity Ron. Seriously. [But then I'm an R/H shipper :)] but the ending to this chapter was so meaningful: "Isn't it strange how easy it is to break a promise?" *sigh* really got me thinking. This seems to be the only Hermione/Draco fic I like. :) I'm usually vehement about fics that break Ron/Hermione up :)

Ha ha ha! u have such great ideas - Hermione as a scarlet woman? You go, girl! :) I think she's much cooler that way. This is such a cool story! Cool factor x 100. damn! this story is so good that I forgot what else I was going to write :)

good job keep writing!