 Shooboosha 2009-10-11 . chapter 2WHY. SO. GOOD?
ARGG~ This was so amazing and in character! I hate the way that most of these stories on don't really get enough love, because this was a wonderful story! All the emotions, and plotwists ((Dishes. SNOWGLOBES." D: Ohmigosh!!)) I can't praise you enough!! <3 |
 CascadingCrimson 2009-01-16 . chapter 1Wow. To say that this story was absolutely, utterly magnificent would a -huge- understatement. I just spent two hours of my weekend reading the story and can safely say that this is by far the best heroes fanfiction I've read so far. Your characterisation was so spot on and your dialogue was perfect and your plot was complex and intricate...gosh. It was just lovely. Considering I was never really interested in the whole Niki/D.L./Micah storyline, nor ever cared much for Nathan's kids while actually watching the series, I never expected to be this engrossed into an ensemble story. Geez, that was really unexpected. :P I must say I love Matt/Mohinder and I was a teeny bit sad that it was actually Sylar (yeah, I know I'm weird coz I'm not that big a fan of Mylar), but it was still a great little storyline. And of course, the Peter/Claude and Peter/Claire had me squeeing like a fangirl, because it was just so amazing and spot on. Zach was of course as adorable as he always is, and Nathan...I felt so much for him. He was written so perfectly. I thought your Peter was a little different from how I imagine him, but the character change made sense, when I look at the storyline. Excellent, outstanding job on this.
I must admit I was a little intimidated that you managed to squeeze in 50,0+ words in two chapters, but it just felt right when I read it, you know? I couldn't think of any place where there should've been chapter breaks. Nice job, and of course I positively squeed when I found that there's a sequel to this story. Oh man, and it focuses on Peter/Claire and Peter/Claude...I can't believe I have enough patience to actually write this review. Going to head out to read the sequel now! :D |
 AllyUp 2008-07-15 . chapter 2What a wonderfully complex and ingenious story! I loved the way you weaved everyone's individual stories into the mixing pot and made sense of it all. I was really sad for Matt, but my Mohinder/Sylar fangirl waved flags as 'Michael' revealed himself. :-) I enjoyed the inclusion of minor characters such as Zack, who is dead cute, and his boyfriend with the special powers.
This was a great read, Thanks |