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| jenniebennie 2008-08-16 ch 3,  | abuseHaha Sakura got the balls that's just awesome. Very nicely written though and that you kept the sand trios personality pretty well in character. The fact that Gai will be a fairy. I can't wait for that so much that a picture would even be great. I can't wait for the next chapter keep up the good work :O) |
| Adelaide 'Adell' Peirce 2008-08-16 ch 2, | abuseThis is really interesting. Good job. More please. |
| crzyaznsroxursox 2008-08-01 ch 2, | abuseThis is good, and a modernized script would be good, though it would be amusing to see Naruto try to understand the original script. Maybe you could have Shikamaru hand out the modernized one after Naruto pesters him with enough questions? Anyways...I'm looking forward to another chapter of this, and also an update for Click Cancel. |
| SilentSinger948 2008-07-19 ch 2, | abuseGreat chapter. Can't wait to see what happens next. |
| SilentSinger948 2008-07-19 ch 1, | abuseInteresting. |
| andy132 2008-07-16 ch 1, | abusegreat story so far i hope you decide to continue it. i looks to be long one which i look forward to reading update soon. |
| jenniebennie 2008-07-15 ch 2, | abuseVery nicely done, and an original concept. I do like how you have the Academy as a military institution. I also like that Sasuke is having a hard time keeping up, it makes him a lot more real and that Sakura is here because of her proficiency in martial arts. I would have to say good job and keep up the good work. Although I don't think I could act like I fell in love with my brother. :O) |