You got me with the apple temptation.

That was a nice oneshot story. I can see Azriaphale not eating apples just because of the garden. :D Very nice.

...and what I just wanted to add before was "What omfg you're 17 and already an author like THIS? Definitely keep writing, youve got all the talent it needs to become a bestseller author"

*scratches head* no I really mean that. Its not just flattery. I dont usually spend my whole afternoon stalking an Author ;) when I could as well do the laundry or feed the guinea pigs.. But I just cant be bothered to lift my butt from the screen. Now, feel special

...Apples make me think of the manga "Death Note" too much. But oh well, Crowley & Azirapahle apples works too.

Yeah, Aziraphale, let him tempt you :)

Crowley can be so sexy sometimes.

I loved your story.

Very nice. ) I particularly like the image at the end.

(On a side note, please tell me that your last little note about reviewers getting "nice shiny apples" was a reference to The Black Cauldron!)

I could see this happening very easily - it should've happened!

Especially love Az reading the "Buggre All This" Bible and Crowley's 'Healthy food promotes Gluttony' reasoning.

Great ficlet!

“You haven’t had any apples.” (falls over) What a perfectly Crowley line! With the hissing and all. I can picture him doing this far too easily. Wonderful little fic. xD

Sweet. I could almost see this happening in the novel. I liked the bit with Aziraphale reading the "Buggre Alle This Bible" when Crowley comes in. Cool ending: "Let me tempt you." Keep writing and bake my apples into a pie before sending them to me.

*fangirls* OMG I love this fic! Both very IC, and very well written.

-Everfire

this is great! now where's mah apple? D:

"They’re not forbod – forden – bad fruit any more!"

heh. this was funny and lovely.