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Crazygirl91
2009-01-16 . chapter 6
That was so cute.. I loved it! ^^
mari85
2008-12-03 . chapter 1
hi there
i love your story, so sweet...and sarah is amasing!
London Romance
2008-08-17 . chapter 6
I officially love you for this fic.

It's so perfect and realistic, which is something most writers tend to forget to include (one more kiss at the end of ONE chapter and I'll hit someone). Seriously, I love this whole story. I only saw a couple missed capitalizations, but the writing made up for that.

I think you have everyone in character too, which is always awesome. Derek in love with Casey was so perfect and his little confessions when he said he loved her made me smile like crazy. I love Casey and her overthinking self. She always needs someone to sort out all her jumbled thoughts, which is where Sarah comes in. I imagined Sarah as Paul for a couple seconds and I totally applaude them for having so much patience. One needs to have tons of patience to deal with Casey. And the happy ending - gah, too perfect! Made me wanna go 'awh', which is always a good thing.

Anyways, of course, I totally loved it. Great fic!
mikaluvsLWD
2008-08-15 . chapter 6
I liked it you should write a sequel.
lulupanda
2008-08-15 . chapter 6
Aw! How sweet! I love happy endings...Great job on this! I could totally see Casey repressing her feelings for Derek and not even noticing it! Haha (The writers won't tell you this, but that's what she's doing in the show) She's such an over-thinker. And they are so completely perfect for each other! *sigh* Loved, loved, LOVED this whole chapter! Great job!
Lanter
2008-08-15 . chapter 6
What a lovely ending, sweet but still perfectly in character for both Derek and Casey.
EreshkigalGirl
2008-08-14 . chapter 6
SQUE! Yayayayayay! Aw, they're so cute.
missmiamya
2008-08-14 . chapter 6
Cute chapter...isn't it funny how that actually does work out like that sometimes...lol. Update soon.
Brontesis
2008-08-13 . chapter 6
Charming ending. Hope you write another.
ellie141516
2008-08-13 . chapter 6
aww! that was soo cute! is it the end?! hope to read more dasey stories by you soon!
wprincessannw
2008-08-13 . chapter 6
I love this story -- the sweetness mixed w/ the totally dasey banter -- I hate it when people dont use their banter -its part of their relationship! ur story made me smile :)
wprincessannw
2008-08-13 . chapter 1
I LOVE UR STORY!! so excited to rd the next chapter and u know its well-written and super cute when the most constructive criticism I can give is to say u forgot the % sign after 100 in casey and tim's conversation. great job
Laura8881
2008-08-13 . chapter 6
That was amazing! I loved it! Wonderful story, I can't wait to read more of your work. :)
Ghostwriter
2008-08-13 . chapter 6
Awesome job. Catch ya on the flip side.
Conterra-san
2008-08-13 . chapter 6
AW

what a great ending! my only complaint is that I want more mush XD but was perfect without it anyway.

loved how that worked out and the thoughts. . .great writing.

thanks for the awesome fic! hope to see more from you!

~Conterra-hime
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