 toastyoats 2009-06-30 . chapter 1a wonderful, cute fic that was neither boorishly ooc or terribly boring.
a really enjoyable read. :) |
 Illyric 2008-11-12 . chapter 1I love this story. I didn't know the three of you wrote together, nor did I connect this story with any of your others until I checked your profile!
::Smacks self in forehead::
Oh well. Anyway, awesome story, and I loved it |
 terra hotaru 2008-11-10 . chapter 1LOL. XD another awesome one! XD I love how Roxas is so afraid of confessing and how he ran away from the dance floor. XD As always, you convey the emotions perfectly! I've never felt like this in such a long time I've been reading in ffnet. XD You write such capturing and enticing story that I didn't even notice that I had reached the end.. O.O Very breathtaking.
I'm speechless as of now but you are really a great writer. The interaction that you made between Axel and Roxas and not turning Axel into a total jerk is amazing. =D O, I love you so much and of course, your fics! Hope to read more!
terra hotaru. |
 Poetoflife14 2008-09-23 . chapter 1Oh my gosh loved it! And their first experience was more believeable in your fic then it most others. I loved the desperation, the feeling, the character development, and of course, the smut. ^^ Keep up the awesome writing!! |
 hiddenyaoilover527 2008-08-20 . chapter 1That was so effing amazing!I Loved it! ^/^ Dude you rock in my book and I hope you write more! |
 axelsgurl 2008-08-20 . chapter 1i absolutly love this oneshot! it was perfect! sweet,sexy, and cute!X) |
 C3LLO 2008-07-26 . chapter 1I Loved It ! Your Writing Is Like A Black Hole, It Sucks Me In, & I Can't Stop Reading It. The Details Are Great ! Thank You For Putting A Smile On My Face ! |
 Tekko 2008-07-20 . chapter 1Wow - I have to say that this was one of the sweetest fanfics I've ever read *^__^* Roxas puts up a strong front but he's no match for Axel's charm and devotion to him. Awesome job with this - I'll be waiting (and reading) more of your work in the future! |
 Roxas In My Pocket 2008-07-18 . chapter 1awe that was cute.. and smexy! lol |
 smileintears 2008-07-16 . chapter 1beautiful. absolutely beautiful. the snow confession was so romantic and perfect. the result was amazingly passionate and sensual, and i loved reading the dialouge.
but the humor awas also amazing:“Dance, snowflakes, dance!”
drunken demyx = Hilarity. not to metion the buzzed Kairi and Namine.
awesome job, keep writing! |
 purewhiteshadow 2008-07-16 . chapter 1Ah yes... I want Axel's sweater. I buy it and then we can cosplay. |
 LollipopLove 2008-07-15 . chapter 1o~ I'm kinda curious about how exactly Sora announced their feelings towards each other *w*
Is this supposed to be their second life? Cuz Axel mentioned something about heartless, and Sora said "Just do whatever your heart tells you to do."
I wish more people would have this much respect for the phrase "I love you" and stuff like it. Like Roxas and Axel... so romantic and so much more meaning.
AW! I love Love LOVE THIS!
But I think what I liked best about this is that they didn't go right into butt penetration [LOL]. Because it really grounds their situation and it's not all "H'OMG! WE FEEL THE SAME! WE SHUD NAO HAS BUTT SMEX 2 SELABR8 R B-U-Tful CONFISHUN!!"[For those not fluent in newb: "Oh my gosh! We feel the same! We should now have butt sex to celebrate our beautiful confession!"]
DEFINITE FAVE! |
 Riku-stalker 2008-07-15 . chapter 1Aww... so cute :3 Really good oneshot, you wrote it really well, and it was original too n_n I liked the part when Axel and Roxas confessed to each other, so cute and fluffy ^-^ Ha... and drunk Demyx is awsome xD "Dance snowflakes, dance!" I could totally see him doing that for some reason... o_O And RikuxSora finally came outta the closet too! Kudos to them! The ending was smexy... well... close to the ending that is. The ending was sweet :3
Great job, hope to see more from you!
-Riku-stalker |
 SkyeFlyte 2008-07-15 . chapter 1Nice story, I liked how you portrayed their emotions! 3 And the winter setting was awesome as well! > I loved Demyx's "Dance Snowflakes, dance!" |
 13loves8loves9loves6 2008-07-15 . chapter 1aw~! hahahahahhaha that was so cute >w |