The Story was a tad hard to follow in places, but overall awesome. I definitely look forward to reading more!! I want to know if peter helps Lexie.

Very cool. Catch ya on the flip side.

It’s well written. It’s just a shame that you’re featuring an unknown. Half the fan fiction on HG are based on OCs these days. I come to this board as I loved the show and it’s characters. When I visit my other fave tv shows on I, as should be expected, I find plenty of fics on well-known, well-loved characters. Don’t get me wrong there are a few OC fics about, but there is an overwhelming amount here in the HG section of . After the stupidly short one season they gave us I come here to get my HG fix, yet I never get it.

If you wanted to tell this particular story, it would have been very apt to have Juliette as the main character. After all they have the exact same issues (cutting & eating disorder) and as it is I very much doubt Peter would place someone with those exact same problems within the Cliffhanger group. It’s all about diversity. Also that way you wouldn’t have had to spent too much effort on setting it up, as we all know her general back story.

Don’t get me wrong, it’s a nice fic. It just seems like the HG section of is one big self help writing exercise as opposed to fanfiction on a tv show. Juliette, Auggie, Shelby, Scott, Daisy, Ezra, Kat, David, Hannah, Peter & Sophie are sorely missed.

How would she have known what Shelby said? Shelby wrote that to Daisy. She never told anybody else. That part makes no sense.

Hmm, this chapter feels way more personal than the other ones, am I correct?
It's a good chapter, but it feels like the balance has shifted from LExi to you. I don't mind, really. Just something I noticed.

good..god. i thought that song died. k. *sigh* katelyn's winning. =[

i dont wanna loose my unicorn's and rainbows girl.

i luff you, kiddo

i am going to(not)kill you if you dont stop with the wrong lyrics, dearest. *innocent grin* short, but great. ha! like you! xP.

uggh katelyn.
**.

xo.RF

Good chapter, it's very good to find out more about Lexi. Also because it's quite personal...
Anyways, I think you're doing a great job on this story. Somehow, it's kind of deeper like other new-kids-at-Horizon stories, and I like it a lot. Good job!

ahh.. katelyn and kac. i hate one and love the other. your doing amazing! i wish this fandom was one that had more reviews, though--you deserve 'em. i love you lady. it even says so on my profile, so smile, feel special. :D


xox.RF

Impressive chapter... Lexie's story wants me to go into the screen and give her the biggest hug in the world =) Or you, for the matter.
The Greek was an interesting turn - I love Greek! Do YOU speak Greek?

i told you, that you'd make me cry. maybe its cause ive already been broken today, i dont know. but i love this. some of the things peters saying sound slightly familiar. *smirks* i love you kiddo. i wish kac, would, drop in. i need a sign today.

x.rf.

Aww, cliffhanger! Not nice! xD
But I think you're progressing real nicely. I liked the 4th chapter more than the 3rd one, because it finally held some answers... The lyrics were a great finding too, but I was too busy reading the rest to find out what deeper meaning they had (I mean, some were obvious, some weren't)
I feel very sorry for Lexie... What the heck has she gone through?
Please update soon!

mh. i.am.beyond.proud. your going to try and do this. you amaze me. and hey, i know one angel girl, whos probably smiling at the thought. i love you kidd.

x.RF.

haha, i hear how to save a life. *smiles*

*giggle, giggle* the 69 string is not good for my psyche you know. but, alas, i shall survive. DOUBTING THOMAS

**, hell. Im impressed. VERY impressed. you, love, have prettier words than you would ever have thought. Keep going, your doing great. Im hooked, and I have this feeling that, before this is over, im going to have to cry. I love you, your amazing. dont ever forget that.

x.Dude

PS-AND im starting a sentence with AND just to make you smile.