Very well-written.

That was a great read, I can't believe I've never seen this fic before. Very well-written, I've always loved this style of fic. The scene choices were very good, and the characterizations were spot-on. Can't wait to read more from you.

Very good, in a bittersweet way. Also very in character, both Sylar and Elle. Great story!

Perfect characterizations for all five meetings. This was a fantastic read