these are really good one-shots, especially this last one! awesome story. hope you update soon! i will be looking froward to reviewing again!! ^_^

these one-shots have a unique style
very good

Loved the chapter! I don't have time to say much, a lot of work to be done, but I just wanted to say how great this chapter was!

Please update soon!

really sweet~!

love always
hisanachan

so romantic! really cute and I loved it so so much!

Well it was very sweet, and I really like that song - but one thing rankles me, and I know that it's stupid, but I can't help it.

You don't 'become a soldier' at a training facility before heading to a war unless you are recruited or drafted during a war. If Ichigo joined for college then he would already be a soldier. It's true that they'd probably send him to a training facility - but it would be for brushing up, not for fullblown training.

As I said - stupid - but I figured I'd write it anyway...

omigod...u made me cry. byakuya is such a sweetie =D the end was so sad. karma is a ** =[[ poor rukia. this could really happen, though...love the chap anyway =D

Ok! I'm Zapenbit's good friend Arely xD...I was so excited whe she told she just wrote a oneshot with this lovely song!!..I just heard it yesterday and I fell for it..along with the kiss scene in Prince Caspian movie *O*. Since the movie showed that scene,SusanxCaspian shippers have been born worlwide...includind me!! xD
Well,that's not the point of the review. I liked this one shot very much..of course,the song helped a lot =D. But somehow this remainded me of the video When You're Gone xD. Anyway,I'm glad I helped a bit..somehow I inspired you xD...I can't stop watching the video and hearing the song..it's so lovely and so...ichiruki!!..it resumes the third movie hahahaha xDD
Good oneshot!!

OH MAH GWAD YOU DID IT AGAIN! YOU MADE ME CRY! IT WAS SO CUTE! WAH! ICHIGO! YOU BASTERD!! YOU BETTER COME BACK! T-T

OMG. That was touching. I listened to the song while reading, and it was perfect. I can imagine this being a real movie or something. So sad, yet, I have a happy feeling about this. Someone leaving for a good cause was like the Soul Society arc. Or Hueco Mundo. Or even the movies, especially the upcoming one. I guess. Hope to read more good stories. Keep it up! *continues crying*

T^T nice chapter

Interesting concept.

I think you might have meant 'deployed' rather than 'deported.'

Good luck with the writing.

lol wow this is an alternate version of bleach XD

interesting twist to the beginning of the series!

love always
hisanachan

really interesting, that was quite a nice chapter.