I loved this story! I pretty much read it all in one sitting, it was great.

I was really really looking forward to some sort of naughty or sexual scene, and I'm a little disappointed you skipped it, but the story was good none the less. You could always add another chapter in there to make things...more descriptive.

Well done!

JFrost

This was fantastic! It was funny but emotional. I really enjoyed it. Was there a hint about a future story concerning Mina in there?

Where's my Mina spinoff!? (Still love you)

hm... memo to me: read first the author's page before commenting on age LOL i read you're 18. only 18 and you write this wonderfully? hope you're majoring in something writing-related heheh hope you go ahead with the mina spin-off, i'll be looking forward to that :) i think her story'll be much interesting, if her character in the story is anything to go by.

That has got to be one of the best written stories i have ever read :) that was just awesome! you made me think, you made me laugh, you made me cry; all the best. and to think (based on your AN's and - pls pls pls don't be offended if my assumption is wrong) that you're only in high school or college (physics, that's high school/college, right? :p) and you write this good? very nice :) very, very nice :)

AW...I REALLY enjoyed this "novel"...I laughed an awful lot...and I stayed up until 3:24 am trying to read all of it...but alas I could not...I had to MAKE myself go to sleep in order to be up at 7:00 am...I like this alot...It is going to be one of my favs! U are an extremely talented girl! I laughed so hard in the chapter where Serena thought Darien was gay! lol...It hurts to hold in a luagh at 3 am in order not to wake anyone! Anywho...I thorougly enjoyed it!

i actually like this story a lot because it is very realistic and something that i can relate to. thank you very much. at least your story has an ending and at least i have a tid bit of idea how i ought to react if i did land myself in such a predicament in the future.

cheers!

Sequel!?

I absolutely love!

You are funny. I stayed up till 3 am to finish this story!

oh damn. lol

okay, so I meant to ask earlier, but did you get the name Jenny Shepard from NCIS? I am addicted to that show and have been since season 1, and am rather curious. haha. If you dont Jennifer Shepard is the director of NCIS. :)

do a little dance
make a little love
get down tonight! (get down tonight)

so far the choice in lyrics you have put in this story have been so '90s. I love it. ;)

I also love your voice as a writer and characters. So far they have stayed pretty true the whole time, and still portray the base characters as well. I'm excited to keep reading!

I'm still in denial that this story is over, so I'll just refer to this... post, as chapter 33, not epilogue.

I really liked chapter 33. Raye's ending (I mean, Raye's part of the chapter) was hilarious. Triplets, no kidding! Lovely wedding imagery - again, I hate perfect people with perfect relationships, but this one was so beautiful it's hard to hate them. Re: My favorite supporting character Mina, I love how you left her in arrested development. She was young and immature and insane, and I'm glad you made her continued growth realistic. She didn't turn around and find someone and get married, she's still learning how to be a person, and so your making her confused but moving forwards was a super way to finish her story (I mean, finish her part in chapter 33). Any chance of a Mina spin-off? :)

Sigh... Finally to Serena and Darien. Amazing way to propose, right back into that closet. Oh, before I forget, thank you for Mrs. Wipple's super cameo! I love that woman! (I also want to smash her over the head with a wineglass.)

Last few paragraphs, just heart-warming with Serena rushing forwards into her perfect future (favorite line: "little cherubic face ahead of me"). And then the hilarious birthing scene. Great way to wrap things up (for chapter 33).

Please, please, please tell me you have something in the pipeline. I don't care if you're starting college or whatever (I just read your bio and found out you were 18), I'm sure you can squeeze in a bit of time to make your fans happy.

Okay, moving on to anger stage then bargaining then depression (but never to acceptance).

Thank you for a lovely future-classic 'fic!

Phantasy Star

I loved this story. The progression between Serena and Darien was fantastic. I also loved how Serena calls him Shields whenever she's upset.

~Wings

aw its over...thats sad...i love this story! wah thank you so much u r a fantastic writer i love it...plz start a new story soon! srry im pushy..lol