Reviews for Breathing Smoke

Raxas 2008-08-13 ch 1, anon.	abuseAww. Sadness. What if one of the goals you think about when writing each and ever fic is "How much do you think II will cry with this one?"? ... Jerk.
Xahtonnoj 2008-07-20 ch 1,	abuseYa know, I was really excited when I saw the new piece o' mail in my inbox. That is, until I read the description. Why must you torment me so? imagine I'm in a really dramatic "WHY!?!" pose right now I've been looking forward to new stuff from you, and you submit yah-hoo-wee(long, drawn out pain-filled 'yaoi')! Oh well. I read up until my eighth sense started poking me in the eye to tell me to stop. Very good sensory description of that pigsty, and it was nice to see you write someone that's assertive instead of a wimpy push-over for a change. joking tone Here's to more frequent updates, even if it is stuff I can't read all the way through. -J
Logen 2008-07-19 ch 1, anon.	abuseSpousal abuse bothers me. 0.o Very good sensory description, and I wouldn't be surpised if this was your commentary on asshole relationships. ... Oh god, I just realized the potential double entendre. eyes bug out until finally exploding with a wonderfully life-ending POP Well, even though it's not the kind of stuff that I particularly like from you, it's always nice to hear from you, Oni. crooked grin - The Equalizer