| Reviews for Me & Mrs Jones |
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naku12 9/12/12 . chapter 1love the story! can u update? |
her voice of adieux 11/22/11 . chapter 1It was a pleasure to read over this charming debut, despite it being incomplete since '08. The atmosphere, description, and characterization reeled in my interest - considering how much I enjoy a well-told story with laces of drama and witty humor. Your style has won itself a spot into my 'favorites' and, although unlikely, I certainly do hope you consider completing 'Me & Mrs Jones' sometime in the future. It's well worth the wait. I praise the form in-which you displayed Kiba. I loved him from beginning to end. Very well-rounded. I look forward to a possible update, but if not I do hope you're doing well, for I read about your current ( I presume ) "collage student" status. I wish you luck in your studies and plot-bunny uses :) Yvette. |
VixenAblaze 6/2/11 . chapter 1this seems interesting! you should update... i mean its been so long so you probably won't but you should! |
Fipa-chan 1/18/11 . chapter 1Oh my God. Oh my God. I cant stop saying oh my God. I just fell in love with this. Please update. Please *puppy eyes* |
craizypet 11/28/10 . chapter 1hmmm... i can understand where kiba is coming from, although it is a little too far with the whole 'attack on boss' and 'calling the client a snobby bitch of an ex.' he would not be in the good books would he... looking forward to the next chapter! update soon! |
Maybe Now 4/22/10 . chapter 1I definitely like it. This Kiba/Ino has promise, because I get so annoyed with others where the two only screech the entire time. I know it's difficult to update frequently, and to be honest, I'd rather CT was updated, but don't forget about this |
megan 1/24/10 . chapter 1 i like it! you should keep going... please :D |
I like angst 4/3/09 . chapter 1Nice start, you got me hooked. I like the premise and your writing style. You've got Kiba down. Please continue. |
Nanaho-Hime 3/11/09 . chapter 1this was very well written, you're writing style flows very well and I'm enjoying the plot line. It's always such a treat to find a well written KibaIno story and this was a real pleasure. Good Luck with the story |
madam.cipher 2/1/09 . chapter 1nice... the plot is definitely something i haven't come across before, and the best part is, everyone's in character. i can't wait to see how things turn out... please update! :) |
sophia666 8/15/08 . chapter 1Great writing. It's very interesting, and I love Kiba and Ino and Akamaru. Please update soon. |
Lady Sayomi 7/21/08 . chapter 1What a refreshing story! Nice to see a new plot. I'm excited for the updates! |
AGENT Kuma-chan 7/18/08 . chapter 1Well, I guess this means that Kiba has a lot of work to do... (AKAMARU! Get Ino to love Akamaru, and then he's safe!) I wonder if the one who is after Ino is someone who she hurt in her designing business? I doubt that's the case, though... (and Shikamaru...he is rather weak-willed towards females. *sighs*) And Kiba being disrespectful and such is truly in his character... (It fits. Very well.) Interesting idea. |
Sodapops 7/17/08 . chapter 1On with a great start. Definitely keeping an eye open for this one. |
leaf.does.not.wither 7/16/08 . chapter 1I dont seek out KibaIno stories, but when talented writers give their take I usually enjoy it. So far, youve built a really nice story and Im really looking forward to see how it unfolds! Everyone seems very comfortable in these roles youve assigned them and (there I say) theres potential for all kinds of stories in there! Maybe after youre done, you could write about this certain Uchiha officer meeting a particularly pink-haired doctor *cough* Im shameless *cough* hehe, anyway, good job! |