Lol, this chapter was really funny. Update soon!

i'm excited for the next chapter!

I really liked this, and I'm looking forward to reading the rest of it!

hey kate, :D

sorry about leaving early yesterday, i needed sleep.

:D me likes this, really much. i like the idea, i like how kiba is unlucky and how everything seems to go so smoothly, how there are so many conflicts between them already

:D and of course i love your writing.

and is excited at the idea of what will happen next.

update soon deary!

This is a really good first chapter.

The characters are belivable and true to themselves, even though they are in a completely new and different setting.

The pace of the story is just right and the formulations in your sentences are just superb.

I can't wait to read the next chapters!