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Reviews For: Sly Cooper and the Gang in Chaotix Mobius
Geeke the Freak 2008-07-23 . chapter 1
This story is really good so far. I can't wait until Sly meet Sonic.

I did notice that when Sly pulled out his binocu-whatevers, I forget what there called, the phrase "Therefore, he reached into his pocket..." sounds weird. You should just drop the 'therefore.'
Lupo di Mare 2008-07-21 . chapter 1
-pokes- This is a good story, update it, or I'm afraid I'll have to threaten you with sharp pointy objects.
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