Wow, this was a very good fanfic! I couldn't stop reading!

Interesting dynamics between the two brothers. I love it! You really brought out some interesting points on their relationship as well as them, personally.

will you ever be doing a Mikeys room story. I'd love to get you're take on it.

I really like this one. It's like a really good character study. I'd like to see you write something where Donnie thinks about Raph, not a demand or request, it's just you do so well here!

Ok, that was the best 'room' story yet. I loved the bit with the fairy tales and Agatha Christe. (I know this isn't the latest 'rooms' story but I already read 'Heavy Rooms'... So all that's left is to write Don going into Mikey's room. Now, DO IT!)

Great job.

Whahoo! Another one-shot. Very nice! You write Raph and Leo's relationship very well (I think that you do an awesome job with all of them) I hope that more one-shots are in our future (or stories or updates of Absense) - But take your time and I hope that everything works out for you. No need to apologize, I'll wait patiently for your awesomeness :)

Awesome story! I like your take on Raph and Leo, and their... complicated relationship. That's okay about Absence, I understand. I just hope everything is okay and nothing too bad has happened. Keep up the great work!

Well, this remined me of a fiction I've read which title was 'Empty Room', except that it was Raph going in Leo's room and not the other way around. After a little research, found out why, you're the writter of it too...

I liked both fictions, but I guess I prefer this one better because in this one Raph is... well, you know, and I won't spoil it.

Anyway, all this to say that I'm fond of this one shot!

Awesome! Well, now you've gone and done it... You can't just leave Mikey and Don out! We gotta have a break down of both of their rooms! Now the question is... should you have Mikey stumble into Donny's and Donny into Mikey's? seems to be the most logical solutions... ah, admit it! You're so totally tempted! Haha, anyways loved it... Thanks so much for writing it! :)

If it's my fault for you writing another brilliant story then I'm more then happy to take all the blame!

I really liked this story! It was so cute! It compliments the other one quite well and just so casually fits into their lives it's like something that really would happen.

I'm so happy you wrote this!

Bravo on another wonderful story!

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Aw, cute! I really liked how perfect Leo's obserations about Raph were. Very well done!

(p.s.-that's ok, I'll just wait as patiently as I can)

Great chapter! Again you've done marvels with the exploration of character through their surroundings!

Thank you for posting!

*glances to both sides- snatches pillow*

Wow. The attention to detail and what each part of Raph's room meant and reflected his personality in a way that is not commonly seen. Beautiful, it truely is.