I really laughed about M-O getting kissed!

Very well written. One of the bits that stands out specifically is the exceptional pacing. I also loved the way you wrote describing MO's thoughts. He is one character I'd like to see developed more by the community and the way you wrote with him is definitely a step in the right direction. I found EVE to be a bit out of character, though. Still, great premise and great fic!

Have a nice day,
Ghost Duck

Wow. I like this story. Even though i make BAD stories.
I only make videos on youtube.
Anyway, keep it up.
~*Ming7865*~

hahahahahahahahahahahahahahahaahaha WHY SO SERIOUS ? :)

This fic hit a lot of emotions. It was funny and sweet and had good pacing. However, I must agree with some other reviews and say that I found EVE kinda over the top. The thing that esspecially got me thinking this was the ion canon. Back in the movie, once EVE had gotten to know WALL-E, she never pointed a gun at him again, even when he got them both in HUGE trouble.

The thing is, even when EVE is angry at WALL-E, she is still caring towards him, you know? She still loves him. That's why this seemed a little over the top. And the idea of them considering breaking up so easily was kinda farfetched to me.

Aside from charatarization though, this was written well.

Very interesting. I don't really think EVE would try to get back at WALL-E by kissing someone else, but I can definitely see her getting really mad and WALL-E getting more and more confused. I like the ending scene, too, and everyone seemed in character.

As far as grammar goes, the only problem I could find was some tense switching. Everything else was good.

By the way, this is the first WALL-E fic I've ever read! Coolness!

I like the idea, and the story. EVE was so rude, but I would feel the same way if i had a boyfriend and he would forgot about that. I didn't got mad at my ex because I never really noticed the day we started going out. And we weren't OFICIALLY going out. Anyway, I loved this story. As I love almost all Wall-E stories.

YAY! U POSTED IT! ^-^

like i said before...I LOVED IT!! (ok...maybe i said "Like" before...but i meant to say i loved it!) ^-^ :)

*adds this to Faves list*

very cute I liked it^^

I approve.



Haha, yeah that story was great. Good job.

Awesomeness!
I'll fav it when I log in again :)

Why don't chu write a story about how they get married, like you mentioned in your closing statement. It would be Way Cool. ^_^

:D That was actually a very good story :D

OMG! Eve was so...aggressive...and weird in this story.

Anyways, FAVED! :)