hey... i hope you get through your writers block...

so the button they just pressed set of the cave in?? or am i plain confused... so if metis' plans are failsafe and cronus just changed her plan then it will fail?? or am i jsut being optimistic?

so neil isnt stuck staring at his reflection anymore?!?!

ohh poor jay he's stressed and its all a trap!

hehe keep up the good work!! looking forward to an update...if you get through the writers block...

Oh well, i guess i was just getting my hopes up.

Maybe Theresa will die in the sequel ;-)

Please update soon.

Well you certainly know how to keep me guessing. I'll be dying for the next chapter now. To be honest I don't think the differing opinions about the button matter much, because Cronus could have easily overestimated the heroes, forgetting that his senses are probably greater than theirs, or the heroes' panic for Theresa made it difficult to focus and thus not as easy to find the button. Way hey, Neil's got a visitor. It's either a jailbreak or a creepy perv from the cell next door. Poor Neil. Muahahahah. Good job, I eagerly await the next installment.

it has been so longt and how come u havent been updating... im still in suspense. Is herry ok, what happened to neil, what are jay, archie and atlanta going to do to save them and what will cronus and metis do to odie and theresa. i am a big herry and odie fan so this suspense is literally ripping me apart so please update not for me but for your fans...

Whoa! It's been a while since I have read this! I had to catch up! I forgot how totally AWESOME this story is! Loved the last chapter, it was so INTENSE and AWESOME. Veryy sort of on the edge of my seat. And you can totally tell your favoritism of Jay haha, loved it. I am an Archie fan myself haha (I'm pretty obvious also) but this is rad.

I love Archie and Atlanta's relationship. Constantly arguing... : )

Update soon!

Oh thank Zeus, shes alive! Yay! Well actualy, thank you! You totally rock this story, it's way hot! And your adventure career should never end, at this point, you could go 30 years working on adventure stories! And yeah, I do preffer the Jay hugs over Archie hugs! Jay, even thought a cartoon, is a sexy cartoon! I even saw this person once, a he look exactly like Jay, except human! He was sexy!
Cheers friend!

Damn! I thought Theresa was dead. Now i'm disappointed.

hey!! have a great holiday! i wish i could go on holidays...lol... great chapter!! i knew theresa wasnt dead...!! not yet anyways... oh jay, archie and atlanta are walking straight into a trap!! ooh... whats gonna happen next...? i guess you cant tell me that.. haha, will have to wait and see... i like how archie and atlanta still bantered even though they could be in trouble, so them!! keep up the good work! cant wait for an update when you get back!! and the sequel shall be interesting!

hey excellent chapter, it was well written i must say. be sure to update really soon because i want to find out what happens to herry and also if they make it in time... oh the suspense

wow. great new chapter! thanks for uploading this! i hope the heros will be ok!

Dang, I'd forgotten about that little detail. Still who cares? THERESA LIVES! WOOT WOOT!
I just have one question though. Not dissing your story or anything, but wouldn't the boulder have just stopped when it met Theresa magic barrier, because unless the tunnel was on an incline (which it probably was but i've just forgotten) I don't see why it would have kept moving...unless it was enchanted. But whatever, I like the story and that's what matters.
Shebedra

this is such a good chapter and i really need to know if Theresa is still alive, and what is going on with Herry and Odie i hope those guys are alright their my favourite, anyway, update soon please! u r awsome when it comes to stories i wish i was like u XD XD

please update soon i really want to find out what happens to Theresa and also poor herry and odie, i ned to find out, please update as soon as possible, much abliged

Ah please get the next chap. up soon. I can't take the suspense and sadness. Awesome chapter!

GAH! SO SAD! ;_; Crying here! Really! PLEASE GET 16 UP SOON! CAN"T STAND THIS SADNESS! I NEED FLUFF!

Really exciting though.
..wait a sec... if Theresa's gone... then Jay's open target... GAH! BAD PHOTO41! J/t IS the best. NOTHING ELSE!.. but still... Anyways I"M IN AGONY HERE!! PLEASE UPDATE SOON!