Ugh, Lydia is exhausting. Love all your writing! It is so typical of Wickham to die in an illegal duel.

Love the romantic moments between Lizzy and Darcy. I love his attempt at a speech in the very beginning. Darcy has always been a bit of a smart alec--in a fabulous way.

Oh, SNAP! Isn't that always the way? I love how you add this wonderful bit. The curious thing is, when did they have time to be charmed by one another?

And so the plot thickens! Love it!

Love the conversations between Lizzy and Darcy! I have nothing to critique, everything sounds so delicately lovely!

This is all so charming! You're writing really gives a picture of the events!

Oh, ROMANCE! Love how you mention the old characters we know and disdain!

Love that Darcy is a protective daddy! Love the daughters! Hattie is hilarious!

Love this! Love the way you describe the daughters!

Love the sense of humor! Your writing is very delicate!

Ah, Ruby, I happened upon this story the other day and read it practically from start to finish...is it finished, by the way?? But, anyway, I truly enjoyed it...it's a very refreshing story, fun to read, and your characters are very Jane Austen-ish without being too Jane Austen-ish. Thank you for these hours of fun!!
:)
Gufa

A very sweet conclusion to a wonderful story. It has been such a treat!

Hugs,

Sarah x

What a sly one that Freddie is! Quite a lovely tale.

so is this the end?

it is all very sudden, but i am happy for all, and freddie's confession makes me laugh.

how realistic your portrait of the darcy family is! they can cat-fight over little things, but there's so much love and forgiveness on bigger issues.

i wonder who geogiana married?