its was good i loved it wish i could read more!

That was really curtest and most awesome one shot I've ever read! XP I loved it. My favorite line is when Kakashi says, "This is so wrong..." XD! I loved it.

Pretty good. Not mind blowing, and the chronology was annoying... but good.

i thought you brought the story together nicely, and managed to put a unique and refreshing turn on an almost cliche' scenario. nice work! :)

What are you talking about? The lemon scene was perfect! I've seen worser ones that didn't even include the details! Kudos for you my friend! Definitely going into my favs. Multi chapters would be VERY nice. Keep up the great work!

You have to make more chapters! Who cares if its a sucky lemon! (which it wasn't even though it was a little bit rushed.) Us narutards have very good imaginations! Haha
But anyway I loved it

I wasn't sure what to expect with the title of the story, but i really enjoyed the structure and originality of it. Great job!

I love how the story was laid out is was excellent. I really liked the ending I found it quite comical. ^_^ Anyway I totally loved it great job!!

HECK YES MAKE MORE CHAPTERS. PLEASE YOU JUST HAVE TO, OH PLEASE. WOW! THIS IS JUST A GREAT, FANTASTIC AND WONDERFULY WONDERFUL FIC.

Great job. I liked it a lot. I like the ending where Sasuke almost suspects something :D

omfg i loved it!! very well written. sasuke is so clueless lol
u should write a sequel to it!

Damn that was so good I wish it would have kept going on and on please do more lemons please

oh VERY nice i really loved this one.

the organization was fabulous and it being TRUE forbidden love where EVERYONE wouldhave disapproved makes it that much more inticing.

Brilliant.

Goddess Bless,

Dokuhime Kobura

I love this story

I like it! Bit rushy like you said, but that isn't necessarily a bad thing ;p I liked it very much. Please do write more, I know it'll be good ;p

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