This was a cool story. My favorite part was in the garden when Rolo yawns.^_^

Interesting :)

It was beautiful but short ..
I understood it completly and it's very touching, if you ask me that is. Will Lelouch ever wake up?

Um... ai'm pretty sure i got seriously confused halfway through, but great story!

My god I love this

Wow, nice. Suitably confusing/disjointed.

I read this on lj and loved it. I still do. :D Your writing is fantastic.