can't wait for the next chapter

Oh you had to stop when it was just getting god~
Pit is adorable!!

So Pit and Link are finally getting closer to each other, eh? That's very good to know. I'll wait for the other update!

0_0 Holy shit...! From the hundreds of hundreds of yaoi stories I've read so far, this one tops them all.

Literally.

That deninitly goes to my favourites, for sure... Damn, I'm gonna need a cold shower...

great story so far, any idea when the next chap might be coming out?

This is hott...very hott...indeed...

I loved this chapter~! :3

Such cute fluff between Link and Pit x3

Can't wait for the next chapter!

~Kaji

How come Pit had that dream and not Link?
Are Pit and Yami connected in a different way than Nocturne and Link?

I feel sad for Links pillow... No pillow should ever experience that XD

Yami will forgive Nocturne, even if Nocturne acted like an idiot...
Those new feelings must be quite confusing for them ^^'

I loved the ending, Pit and Link is such a cute couple! X3

Update soon!

Ohh, I wondered what's happening! :3

This chapter was hilarious, it kept me laughing and smiling from beginning to end.

Poor Yami though, having to experience all those feelings and such. I should say the same thing for Nocturne, but eh.

The Link's pillow tidbit was hilarious. I'm pretty much never going to look at pillows the same again. Which, I don't know if that's a good thing... :D

Continue to upload!

-VampireFriend

I love this story~! :D

It gives me my much needed dose of fangirly nosebleeds XD

Yami's outfit sounded so CUTE~!! X3

But it didn't stay on long XD

Love it~! You 2 keep it up!

~Kaji

Very nice chapter indeed! X3

Yami having a harem, for some reason I can't really imagine him having a harem (Probably because Pit looks so innocent).
Nocturne on the other hand... I can really imagine him having a harem! XD

I can't wait to read more! : )

Second chapter? Hell yes! X3

You really have a lack of mistakes; and that's hard to find in a writer around here. At least on .

It's getting more and more intresting; well, at least I think it is. :)

-snorts- The whip that can tear off clothes. That is.. classic. XD That was pretty unpredictable for you to add that in.

Well, I gotta go look for more fanfics and such to keep me not bored.

Hope you continue to upload,

VampireFriend

I'm still pretty new to writing, so I don't have any mistakes to point out. :)

That was pretty hot XD
A threesome! (Well sorta) How scandalous! XD

And it was sorta cute how starry eyed Pit was x3

Yami certainly was NOT some regular girly uke! No regular girly uke has a harem! XD

Well anyway, love this fic! You 2 keep up the good work!

~Kaji

Omg! ahahahaah! Dark Pit and Dark Link, gotta love em! very good chappy can't wait for the next one^^

I liked this fanfic, I really enjoyed your style of writing and your lack of spelling and grammar mistakes!! >w< It can be difficult to find good writing here, but I luckily found you~ *Applauds*

Also, have you written the second part yet? Or am I going to have to wait?