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Santoryuu-Zoro 2008-08-20 ch 1,	abuseLove it! Hurt!Roy and all! AAWESOME! I can only really find Ed-hurt/angsty stuff... But this is good! I can't wait for the next chapter!
Haleybird 2008-08-13 ch 1,	abusegood story, very sad, should be more than a one-shot!!
Roy-Fan-33 2008-08-09 ch 1,	abusedrol M, developed characters... Ahghra
Sevlow 2008-07-29 ch 1,	abuseOH HOLY CRAP IN A BARREL! How did I not know that you'd posted this?! Jeebus! You have no idea how excited I am right now. OMG OMG. Sick!Roy AND a belly-wound?!?! Oh, how you spoil me. I'm overcome by your generosity. AND you throw an angsty, hurty!Ed into the mix as well. Good lord. As always, I LOVE your descriptions. You have such a talent for getting the scenery to be part of the action, and your sense of space is always brilliant. I fail at that horribly, so I'm always stunned when people can pull it off so well. Iz jealous. :( I giggled with near-hysteria when Mustang said, “Motherfucker shot me in the gut.” OMG. Priceless. I know that begging won't make you want to update any faster, so I won't beg and I'll say only that I eagerly look forward to a conclusion if you decide to give us one. I FREAKIN' LOVE YOU.
kyhplz 2008-07-28 ch 1,	abuseI love this! Keep it up. =)
DreyaCira 2008-07-21 ch 1,	abuseDude! Someone came out with something new and in my favorite ballpark and I haven't read it yet! I love you! Well, technically, the cots may be colder than the ground, considering cold air can come at them from all sides. That teasing really isn't very fair. Oh noes, and now Ed's being punished for revenge...and Roy's sick?
Tia Ordona 23 2008-07-20 ch 1,	abuseYES! Hurt!Roy and uncomfortable!Ed are my favorites, so I must thank you for writing. I'm very, VERY psyched to see part two coming out. This story was so well written, and the mechanics were perfect. I'm very impressed with your style of writing! :D Please update soon! I want to see how this comes out!
Cold-Foxx 2008-07-18 ch 1,	abuseWow. This is AMAZING. I'm so into it that I could have been there, the scenes were so vivid! And Roy and Edward are both in-character, and their humor is amusingly morbid and awesome, even in their situation. Good job! Oh, and I definitely wouldn't mind seeing a second part to this--I want to see the survive (or at least make it back to Central, to feed my angst)--so I'll keep my hopes up. :]
InuyashaLuver1224 2008-07-17 ch 1,	abuseI really loved that...it was awesome! Please do continue to make it exponentially more awesome!!
Legendary Chimera 2008-07-17 ch 1,	abuseIt took me such a long time to read this and you've kept me wonderfully entertained while I've been laid up. Thank you for sharing your talent.
Naetara the Turtle 2008-07-16 ch 1,	abuseOh lord, you MUST continue this. I can't even think of anything to say other than this is ridiculously incredible. I adore your writing style, and... man. Just awesome.
Jessi Tsuki 2008-07-16 ch 1,	abuseI would love to see where this is going, it's very well written and interesting. I love Hurt/Comfort situations XD
MithLuin 2008-07-16 ch 1,	abuseWell, obviously, we'd all like to know how they're going to survive this one...so a part 2 would be nice ;). And if Mustang's really that badly off - feverish and wounded - they might be better off if they were taken prisoner than if they were left on their own in the wild. For criticism...most camps have sentries of some sort. So, how did the Drachmans sneak in?
Kalez25946 2008-07-16 ch 1,	abuseAwesome! I love this! Really liked the comments between Ed and Roy. Though were the BEST!! And I always like war fics. they rawk! P.S. I know what you mean about Sevlow's story "Sick" being 'damn...'All of her(he? IDK..)are awesome!
jenelric 2008-07-16 ch 1,	abuseOh my God this is so amazing!! I absolutely love it! I'm especially impressed by the way you portray the relationship between Roy and Ed. It's wonderful, and so amusing to see - especially near the end. I love the interaction there. It's like some sort of grim humor and it fits perfectly. Wonderful! And I would LOVE to read more! I would most definitely be cartwheeling around while doing back flips...in a circular motion if you did. Awesome job!!

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