*sings* amazing!

I love the name Natsume! <3
It's reminds me of Hyuuga Natsume from Gakuen Alice, although the Natsume there is a boy.
Anyway, great story!

-Setsuna

Aww.. this was bittersweet.

I am aware this is a oneshot, but I am most curious as to how this pans out.

..and I got a kick out of Sasuke being impotent. :))

What an amazing idea. Only a good author such as you could pull such a deep story out perfectly.

Sasuke should be happy he has a child at all. I wouldn't be surprised if he was gay or asexual, with the growing amount of fans for those couples it seems that he is. Good job.

I loved this! Despite the randomness, it was really quite inspiring. Very sad, but I in a good way.

this is such a beautiful little idea. If only we could get a chapter where she's told who her da is. Oh man. this is such a great storyline and I love the name, I love the very idea of it. Well done.

this one was beautiful.

I'm (as my name suggests) a huge Sasuke fan and therefor don't like the light on Sasuke(He's not THAT uncaring. He is to be honest a little bit better as a father figure than Itachi.). I like the good father Itachi though even if he did kill his clan, (and who knows how many others) its nice to think of him as a caring individual.

Angsty ones are my favorite! Does this friend of yours have this whole story written out? I would love to read this kind of plot. what a phenominal story! Oh gosh I loved this!

T_T *sob~*
i love it~ i really love it~
i hope u'll consider a sequel.. something to let dat darn emo lame lil uchiha kno sakura n natsume's better off wit her 'real' dad.. it's so sad they'r separated jus like dat~ pls~ T_T

sequel? please? SEQUEL!

Just one word: Beautiful ! So beautiful ! thank you very much for sharing those piece of imagination you have! Friendly Larethiana

Kawaii...i love it! so sad, and so beautiful...

Inspiring and touching!