“Glad you could join us, Miss Swan,” Mr. Berty mused. There had to be a manual that required teachers to say that whenever a student walked in late.

I thought that was pretty funny. I heard that a lot when I was in school, I was always late to class.

Great chapter. Ive been reading a lot of AH lately so I thought Id go for something else and I think I saw your story rec'ed on HGE. Ill try to review every chapter cuz I know how important feedback can be, seeing those review notices in my inbox make me happy so I know you must feel the same. I like it a lot so far, can't wait to catch up.

Well written w/ easy to read dialogue. Can't wait for more!

please update soon its been forever

I doubt it will come up in the last chapter, but it would be nice if they would discuss the electricity that she feels whenever he enters the room. Does he feel it too?

Have I told you that I like this Edward? He's actually funny and charming, and pretty swoon-worthy.

I KNOW you know I enjoy your Mike characterization. I've probably said so before, but I laugh aloud every time at the "Mike in wolf's clothing" line - as though Mike is the quintessential sheep. Plus I find it funny and apt that somehow making Mike dangerous and sexy would somehow = Edward. Poor Mike.

I think this story needs a funny outtake when you finally get done: the Adventures of Eduardo.

Oh, and that reminds me - why is Edward at this party? I'm guessing Alice saw the moment Bella determined to go and then Edward decided to check up on her. Alice wouldn't be able to see the dock almost-incident ahead of time, right? In the same way that she can't anticipate Tyler's van in the books? He must really like her if he's hanging out at Forks keggers just to make sure she's okay. :)

I have recently read your story and have thoroughly enjoyed it!! Great twist on the Twilight stories. I am new to FanFiction and still trying to figure it out, but was wondering if you are still updating the story? It looks like it was last updated in July, but again, still trying to figure out the site. Hope you continue with it as it is wonderful!

I think this story is better than Twilight. You are such an amazing author. I've read this story about five times through and am constantly checking inbox for an alert about a new chapter. Update soon before I cry!

I love this story! Well since I'm not very good writing in English because I am Chilean, rather than em ashamed that so wrong ... Do not laugh at what I write ok? I take a long time to catch up almost a week! but I did and I must say I love it and I can not deny. is so interesting and I'm waiting for that update! I hope everything turns out excellent. We read soon, good or at least I hope .. but finally I write this in Spanish... "te cuidas y la pasas lindo... aiosines gloria=)"

pd: perdón si algo está mal escrito como te digo aun no tengo mucha práctica escribiendo en ingles O=D

love this story. updte soon!

Oh my freaking goodness! I'm so loving this story! I hope you plan to update soon because I'm hooked!

I stumbled onto this fic through some twists and turns but I'm so gladd I arrived. This is an awsome I hope you update soon. I love it!

I came across this story the other day, and I'm SO glad I did!! I love it! I'm excited to keep up with the rest of it as you finish writing/posting.

Jesus, I think I'm more giddy reading this than when I read New Moon for the first time. :3

*bows down and worships*