i like the referrences you've included in this story.

i can't remember if i've encountered a similiar plotline before (or not), but this is one of the exceptional.

I'd love an audio recording of this ff story. it'd be nice to listen to when i can't sleep. although i'm not sure how much good that would do if i stayed up all night listening.

well turns out i've reviewed only a few chapters.

SERIOUSLY? your review count does this story no justice.

and not because of the hype or the amount of times you've been fav'd around the ff community. it's because your stories are just.. yeah. phenomenal.

your one of my favourite authors.

i was looking through itsanewday's favourited stories, and came across this. i have to admit i'm pretty PO'd about the fact i haven't reviewed. i can still remember staying up til 3am reading this amazing story.

I love this story so good you are a really grat writer please update and soon I am diing to kown what happens next

I really like this story, but man are these two all over the place. I hope they get their stuff figured out soon.

AMAZING ! I'm totally blown away by your story.

I just finished reading your story and had to drop in to let you know that I find it to be a beautiful story. Very introspective. Your storyline is different and unlike others I've read, which is nice. I'm going to put it on alert and hope for more.

Wishing you well,

T

I really loved the preface here. It was succinctly well-written.

I am interested to see where this goes, and I can't wait for the introduction of everyones favorite sparkles;)

UPDATE UPDATE MORE CULLENS PLEASE

i will admit, that when i'd first stumbled across the summary, i'd thought the possibility of "just another Bella leaves Jacob for Edward" story present. but,

HOOOOOOOLLLLYYYY SHAEYT was i wrong. oh, my god. i am sooooo sorry for ever have allowed those thoughts to cross my mind.

it was after dinner. perhaps around seven or eight o'clock. i happened to google "highly recommended Twilight fanfiction". results showed up. (okay, i'm just going to admit now i have no association with this website and am not pimping it out. it's your own choice whether you want to check it out) /twilight-fan-fiction/

during the first chapter, your disclaimer proclaimed you'd taken upon a quite literally interpretation of the repercussions in altering the plot.

and i like it. alot. so much so, fangirls and boys may hate me for confessing this, but i really would have preferred the Twilight novel hardcopy to have been your version instead of Meyers.

unfortunately, i'm going to have to cut my reading short for tonight ...or this morning, considering i haven't stopped reading Innocent Vigilant Ordinary for over 6hrs straight since i started chapter 1. that translates to my clock reading 1.50am. i need to be up by 7am at the latest tomorrow. fml, i just know i will be majorly deprived of sleep tomorrow. this story is totally worth it though.

i have a biology assessment with a huge weigh-in due come wednesday. but it can get stuffed, cuz i know i'll be back to reading your story tomorrow night.

Sincerely

Joy xoxo

p.s. in case you mightn't have gathered, I LOVELOVELOVE this story, your plot, your writing and well, you. for writing such an awesome narration.

a virtual hug is being sent your way

p.s.s. (or is it p.p.s? anyway...) if you're totally creeped out by this review/message, i'll completely understand. i'm a bit totally-maybe-likely-utterly-realllllyyyy sleepy. my brain's turned into mush.