|Reviews for Innocent, Vigilant, Ordinary|
| actec18 7/27/08 . chapter 10
Yeah you are right it wouldn’t be believable if certain events happened out of nowhere even if I really really want to hahah
I know this review sucks but my keyboard is sucking! anyways great update :P
| raggedyman-irememberyou 7/27/08 . chapter 10
this is a really good story. i love your writing style, and even though all the build-up toward the whole relationship is extremely frustrating to read, it's a mark of a good writer to be patient like that and fill in all the holes in the background before the main action.
so yeah, that's the fancy way of saying i love how you're writing the story but i'm dying to read more, lol. i also think it should be interesting to see the difference with like the Cullen family's reaction to bella, since Alice is the only one who's witnessing everything.
great story! can't wait for more!
| lasting illusion 7/27/08 . chapter 10
Another absolutely PERFECT chapter! Ah you are such an amazing writer! I was again hooked, and I am just soo glad that you update regularly! I loved the Bella/Edward convo. and I love that you arent rushing anything with them. I loved that you showed a hint of Alice at the end... I love the yeti/bigfoot theory, Bella has spinning in her mind lol!
I love EVERYTHING about this chapter and story!
Thanks for another great one and I cannot wait for the next amazing one! :D
| wantingedwardcullen 7/27/08 . chapter 10
great chappie! Loved the tension! Anyway I also enjoyed the "mike followed me around like a lost puppy" analogy! You make me happy!
| wantingedwardcullen 7/26/08 . chapter 9
wonderful chapter! i think edward acts so cute in this chapter.
| JulyPie 7/26/08 . chapter 9
Edward is so considerate, and they're not even having a passionate romance right now yet he still wants whats best for her. I look forward to seeing how this turns out
| illusiontoureyes 7/25/08 . chapter 9
Bwuahahahaha! Just as I expected. This story keeps getting better and better! :) I loved the end of this chapter. It has me itching for more Bella/Edward moments. Like everyone else, I'm realy excited to see how they get together since she's with Jacob. eep! :)
I hope to see another update soon. hehe
| actec18 7/25/08 . chapter 9
"It was the first time he’d ever spoken my name. I hated that I knew that" I love that line!
And I love that Edward sill wants Bella to go to Dartmouth! But I really hope she laughs at him :P
very god chapter
please update soon :)
| lasting illusion 7/24/08 . chapter 8
I love everything about your story! I love that you are showing the tribes beginning, I love that you made such a strong Bella and Edward connection, I love that Bella has such a strong connection with the Quileutes...I cant wait to see more about how Sam meets Emily the imprint, and for Bella and Edward to happen...which will be awesome because of how difficult and truly forbidden it is...you know cause of the whole strong her and Jake bond and everything!
Well as you can see your story has really kept me intrigued and I cannot get enough of it! :D
Cannot wait for the next update, and for more Cullen moments! :D
| Swimchik 7/24/08 . chapter 8
Poor Sam...oh and Leah. You do a really good job with all the characters pre-mythical personalities. I also really love the Edward/ Bella interaction... though I feel bad for Jacob. Great Job!
| actec18 7/24/08 . chapter 8
Woo this one was really good!
And I agree Sam's change should be the fastest and because Im me I really want the others to change quickly so we can have some action!
And Ill be waiting for some Edward/Bella interaction as well :)
| JulyPie 7/23/08 . chapter 7
Fluff away, it works! "A hundred and four actually" awesome line. Cause it's true! I am interested to see how this turns out. Update!
| JulyPie 7/23/08 . chapter 6
OMG! The coma thing was so smart! That never even occured to me. Nice use of a 'what if?'. Edward is being awesome, loves it.
| wantingedwardcullen 7/22/08 . chapter 7
YOU CAN:T KILL BUNNIES! ;) greaqt story! love it!
| actec18 7/22/08 . chapter 7
Yai an update!
I loved this chapter even though it was a little hard for me to understand it cause English its not my... you know the word (cause I just forgot haha)
I dont have a hard time understanding normal english but shakespeare english its not my thing I did watch the movie and I kinda got it after reading it for the second time :)
im gonna go now cause Im ramling and because I just finished my last test Im not thinking clearly