|Reviews for Innocent, Vigilant, Ordinary|
| StarsWithoutNight 1/6/11 . chapter 35
Almost every single fic I've read so far has been so predictable that its almost nausiating but I continue because I am unabashedly addicted to Edward fluff! But your story threw me for a loop in almost every chapter keeping me up most the night not only reading but dwelling on the angsty feelings of the characters far too much. I hate and root for this Bella at the same time. SM made her such a floor-graveling doormat for Edward that I seriously want to smack some spicegirl-power into her head and tell her he at least needed a rightous bitchslap for the shit he pulled in new moon. But your Bella had a head on her and went for what she wanted and punished those who hurt her. I did hate, absolutly loath what she did to Jacob because I am a fan of giving everyone at least a shot at getting what they sincerely desire but I do realize their relationship needed to end somewhere to make way for Edward.(Edward is always first on my list)
I can see where you started getting bored with this story (the excruciatingly detailed thoughts and feelings of Bella) and I dont hate you for it. You at least got through the first kiss and thats my favorite part (where he pulls her to him and grabs her hips and claims her...ya) so I can live with the unfinished story. It just seemed like you were trying to prolong and drag out the inevitable and it was becoming annoyingly painful so way to stop while you were ahead. (Plz excuse my bluntness)
I know you probably wont even read this review but i just had to convey my admiration for the freshness of your tale. Thank you for sharing it with us.
| Feenrai 1/3/11 . chapter 35
Fantastic! I really loved this! Thank you for sharing it :D
| Feenrai 1/2/11 . chapter 26
I'm sorry I'm not a veryconsistent reviewer...it's a mixture of being too absrbed in such a captivatingly well written story, and reading it from a device that is xcruciatingly hard to "type" on...that said your story is far too good for me to justify putting off another review any longer.
As I said,your writing is exceptional! You capture emotions in the characters so well and you detail the surrounding events so believably that it is impossible not to get sucked in. This chapter is a perfect example. I once did to a boy what Bella did to Jacob. He was wonderfully sweet and completly in love with me but I realized I wasn't in love with him...this chapter perfectly captured the flurry of painful, angsty emotions we felt when I broke up with him.
Superb job and fantastic story...thank you!
| Feenrai 1/2/11 . chapter 19
I love this story so much! It is so addicting :D I particularily appreciate how well you have taken a small change like when Bella went to Forks and when the Cullens did and carried it out in a believable and "realistic" way!
| hairline 12/29/10 . chapter 35
| hairline 12/29/10 . chapter 32
im so hooked on his story
| cowsdomoo2 12/28/10 . chapter 35
I have to say that I am addicted to this story! I just finished reading though it only to find that it's on hiatus :(
I understand though that a writer must be as much in love, if not more, with her story as the readers are in reading it. I really hope that someday you can find enjoyment in writing this again.
| beecks 12/26/10 . chapter 35
I miss your updates :( You're such an amazing writer!
| KzintiKiller 12/26/10 . chapter 35
I get that the Muse has gone AWOL. Been there, done that, and bought the t-shirt my own self. That doesn't stop me from mourning though. This easily makes my top ten list, in a fandom that has a dearth of high-quality mature writers in it.
I hope you come back someday, but if you don't, I can always spin my own endings in my imagination.
| Annie Larsson 12/24/10 . chapter 35
This is such an awesome story! I hope you'll finish it someday! :)
| Tomboy Amy 12/23/10 . chapter 30
In the Edward Bella situation, it's kinda like the roles reversed. At first, it was Bella who was constantly trying to befriend him and be near him and Edward was the one telling her to stay away. Now it's Edward who wants to be around Bella, but Bella won't let him. When I say won't let him, I mean that it seems even though Bella is saying to stay away, he's being around her. He can do it all he wants, but bella just doesn't like it.
Lol I don't even know how much I wrote. I'm reviewing from my phone so I apologize for any mistakes :P
Love the chapter and love the story. Definitely going on my fav stories :)
| Stiehl 12/22/10 . chapter 35
It's such a shame that you've put this story on hiatus, because frankly it's excellent. I began reading this and couldn't stop until I had finished it. I do hope to see some updates from you in the future.
| BendItEdward 12/19/10 . chapter 35
Is this story still being written?
| ishandtwofourths 12/17/10 . chapter 35
you know, i didn't realize that this fic hadn't been updated in so long. but, over the past few days i reread the entire thing again, and i think i've fallen more in love with it than before. i've read a lot of twilight fanfics, and hands down, this is my all-time favourite - to the point where i think this should be canon and the real books seem like mediocre fanfic (seriously. i don't mean that as hyperbole).
i noticed your author profile mentions your writer's block and lack of enjoyment in writing this, and that's truly a shame. i think you've woven a beautiful story here, and i can only hope that you're able to get back in the saddle again - not necessarily for all your fans (although selfishly, i have to admit i am DYING for more to this fic), but for yourself as well, because i know how important it is to actually enjoy the writing process, rather than to just churn something out joylessly. best of luck with that, and i'll just keep my fingers crossed that this wonderful story will one day continue on. :)
| Team Switzerland678 12/10/10 . chapter 5