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| lilgurlanima 2008-08-11 ch 11,  | abusewow thanks... really... will yuki be able to suck all the venom? hope he's alright... |
| MiniBloodyMurder 2008-08-11 ch 11, | abusewow, bitten twice ouch, that gotta hurt!, i once got a paper cut and i got an other cut in the same place, and it hurt even more!! ps, i'm flattered for dedicateing this partly to me!, thank u and all ur chapters were not weird! they were awsome! |
| Yaoi flame 2008-08-11 ch 11, | abuseWell, thanks for dedicating this chapter to me, I was really enjoying reading it! Well, Tatsuha is one really naughty boy, isn't he? Still, you can't blame him, he has a hormonal hurricane...He's a teenager, after all! Who'd tell that Mika would sacrifice for her brothers? I liked that! I dunno if she loves Tohma, but still, I find that she really sacrificed. And, of course, I don't mind you took that thing from me, because it was written in a review. It was like an advice and I appreciate you liked and accepted it! I wish you all the best, and I'm looking forward to your new chapters. Until then, Yaoi flame. |
| MiniBloodyMurder 2008-08-10 ch 10, | abusewow..bluntfull!!lol update..u rox |
| lilgurlanima 2008-08-10 ch 10, | abuseyuki offering his blood to shu how generous of him... hehehe |
| Yaoi flame 2008-08-10 ch 10, | abuseThat was good! I especially liked the line: The author nodded. "Drink my blood, Shuichi." I could just imagine determination in Yuki's voice and his insane(and beautiful)eyes... I'm wondering what Tatsuha said... Tell me, please? ;) |
| MiniBloodyMurder 2008-08-09 ch 9, | abusewow...they got over it that quickley, i wish they were my parents..they would forget about my messy s room |
| lilgurlanima 2008-08-08 ch 9, | abusehm...just imagine shuichi ripping some ones heart out :p |
| Yaoi flame 2008-08-08 ch 9, | abuseThat was good...I liked it a lot! But shouldn't they be scared because Shuichi has just killed someone? Well, I just noticed that by accident. Thank you for updating this soon, it meant a lot! :) I'm looking forward to next chapter! Wish you all the best! P.S.What were Tatsuha and Ruyichi doing then...? *go away, naughty thoughts!* |
| MiniBloodyMurder 2008-08-07 ch 8, | abuse:D |
| lilgurlanima 2008-08-07 ch 8, | abusewow... didn't expect that one coming... id be expecting angel and human... but not angel-vampire... anyway shocked me there... |
| Yaoi flame 2008-08-07 ch 8, | abuseGreat chapter! Congratulations! You really know how to make the story interesting! BUT there is one really bad thing about this all...and that's the fact you're updating so slow! Please try to update sooner, some of us want to read more of your incredible chapters! :) Just keep on like that! A little advice: Try to make characters deeper, I love the conversation form, but describe a little how they felt, what they were thinking,enterier, etc. I hope you don't mind. But still, I think it could be good even without it. |
| lilgurlanima 2008-07-31 ch 7, | abusei'll be expecting the next chap! |
| MiniBloodyMurder 2008-07-31 ch 7, | abuseum , sarcastic much? nah , well i was surprised. |
| fahaar 2008-07-30 ch 7, | abuseprince huh hahahaha (evil laugh) |