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Minaenna
2009-11-25 . chapter 10
I like this! I can't wait what will happen. Is Riku still one of Sena's niisans? If is, what will happen when they get to know about each other XD

And about pairing, I'd like most Sena/Shin, Sena/Akaba and Sena/Yamato
Jenaminya
2009-11-19 . chapter 10
This is good! Overprotective Agon-niisan.. :D

If you want to watch the anime:
/watch/eyeshield-21/
/library/Eyeshield_21
Epoch95
2009-10-30 . chapter 10
I really like your story.=) So please keep updateing. PLEASE UPDATE SOON!
Tuli-Susi
2009-10-18 . chapter 10
Oh, I really love this story! Congrats on reaching the first milestone! (10 is the first milestone, right? not 5?)

I really love it when people write about what would happen if Sena had been friends with different people first. It's always interesting to see how relationships would pan out, and how it would go down in a game. (ie, when you write the game against Shinryuuji, that'll be interesting to see!)

Keep up the good work! I'll be rooting for you all the way!
NeoGene
2009-10-16 . chapter 10
I love this one!! And Sena' tenacity on everything! Go, Sena!

About the pairing, I like ShinxSena or KakeixSena.
DaAmazingMeepers
2009-10-16 . chapter 10
An interesting twist on how the story could have been. I like it. More soon please!=3
Obiki Doragon
2009-10-15 . chapter 10
Great to see you back Kiseki! I've read a lot of Femsena, well as many as there are. But of course yours will be a top fav. Another thing, I can see a small rivalry between Sena and Karin, well at least amogst their fans.
xXShadowedfateXx
2009-10-14 . chapter 10
hm. Sena, isn't an athlete and female, she should have quite a few fractures after this game(poor girl). The fact that they lost the game gives her time to heal before the team's next chance. Just a suggestion. Thanks for updating,and I'm cool with ooc Agon and crew, you bend them to suit your needs as a fic writer. Have fun, bcuz I had fun reading this chapter. congratz on ur double digits. lol.
xDarklightx
2009-10-14 . chapter 10
I love it. I can't wait to read more. Update soon.
Mesonoxian
2009-10-13 . chapter 10
I love this fic!!
Haruhi.Hime
2009-10-13 . chapter 10
ahh thanks for updating! plz continue since your story is so good!! lol
GenderBenderLuver
2009-10-13 . chapter 10
This is so adorable w< SO CUTE!!
HikariAi
2009-10-13 . chapter 10
Totally AWESOME. I love this story, I like they way you want to make the pairing. ^_^

PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE update soon, ne. ^_^
Sleeping Moon
2009-10-13 . chapter 1
pair fem! Sena up with Kakei please...not enough love for this pair!
Bar-Ohki
2009-10-13 . chapter 10
I don't think the Nagas boys were too OOC, they seemed pretty cannon with the rest of their behavior in this fic. Though, I think Unsui would had been the one doing the bandaging and Agon would had been mauling something. But that's me. What you did was fine.

Though, I'm glad you were able to find time to update.
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