update soon

What happens next?

this is really good, you have to continue!

Ohhhh... when is Chapter 6 coming out? I am a fan of Labyrinth. Jareth as always is a prick... but.. don't distroy the world when Lance wins (he's just gotta win, for Sarah's sake). The Labyrinth world is so cool...

This is the best Labyrinth fic I've read in a long time. I luv it! I hope u add more very very soon!_

*chuckles* I see what you mean. Good chapter. And good wall test.

Loving it so far! I like the idea of Sarah losing and someone else needing to set it right.

Lance does seem a bit too unreal for his own good however.

Is there some reason you couldn't have made him older? The time frame doesn't appear to matter.

Wow a new chapter! Keep up the great work, because this story is great!

wow this is cool keep it up

It's ok that you took a while to get this chapter out.. it was worth the wait! will this be a j/s fic? (imma j/s fan)..

You called me Evil when I left My story off.

FINISH THE STORY YOU EVIL AUTHOR YOU!

I have to admit, I did have my doubts about this story before I started reading. But you have put them to total rest with such an interesting idea. Your story is great! I like the characters, too. Lance and Aurora (I love that name) are great. Write more when you can!

THIS IS AMAZZZZZZZZZZZZZZZZZZZZING! you MuSt write more! MUST MUAT MUST MUST MUST! i absitivley poselutely love this fic! more!

aiko

noo! ...sigh..you know I'm pretty mad at Jareth! He cheated! Grr..I have a few things to say to him...

1) Come home and feed the fish

2) I am VERY disapointed in you, Jareth

3) The owner of the white sudan please come your lights are on..

4) WHERE THE HELL IS THAT DAMN CRYSTAL?*refers to the one supposedly hidden in Sarah's room*

5) Lance is so gonna beat your butt Jareth!

6)Write more!

Sarah was supposed to win? Hmm, interesting. I like Lance, he has a great sense of humor... even if it is ill-timed. ;) Hope you recover from your writer's block soon.