Great story! You have a great talent.

Awesome Vinsmouse, I was so glad to see you finished this story. Thank you for sharing

good story.

Who is Jason, and what is his connection to Marie and Joe? Who is the mysterious (imaginary) watcher? I hope you find the time to finish this one as I'm anxious to find out what happens next.

Oh I've been waitng to you to continue, Still awesome, keep em comin. Can't wait to read what happens next. Hope you had a good semester.

Comesi comsi nice little muse, plenty food here.

That was good. I like the way they are really together, and I agree with Joe. Hospitals do that, they take people, and then you never see them again. I have always found it hard to trust something that does that.

Poor kid, he's gonna have it rough when they tell him. Then again, they are a strong family, I reckon they'll get over the rough spots. Don't know which way the news will go, but that's gonna be so we get something more to read.

Thanks for a great chapter, *hugs* John

Another awesome chapter. I hope they all can show Joe just how much they really do love him? Please hurry back with more.

Awesome chapter, I hope Adam and Hoss can find out who was taunting him. Hurry back with more.

Good chapter, poor Joe, he's gonna have it rough for a while there. Good thing she was there to helpd his dad. YOu know, I've helped trian people like her once, so they'd get to test run on someone not a real scenario.

I think I've started to grown more for Adam for some reason though, I want tosee how they take it, Poor boys, all of them. You write it good though, and I loved that line about stanidn and bein sensible,

*hugs* take care now, John

Very good!! Was kinda nervous about a au Bonanza, but I like this!! Too bad the Cartwrights arent really in the 21st century!! Just one teensy thing...please stop torturing me with cliff hangers. You might want to stop this for your own good...I've heard some nasty lynch talk going around... :D
Keep up the great work and more please!!

Darn! Another cliffie! Goes off muttering and shaking her fist at the author considering looking for said author with a mind toward lynching. Seriously another chapter soon please.

At first it was a little hard for me to imagine the Cartwright not in the west with horses and guns and stuff, but once I got into the story, it has turned out to be pretty good.

Keep it up!
As Always,
Desi

I just read chapter 5 and I still love it. I hope Joe is OK. Hurry back with more;O)

good story. can't wait to read more.

Wonderful story, very well-written and interesting. Great job. Can't wait to see more.