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Mikomimaru
2009-09-05 . chapter 4
Love the story so far. Zack should have been in Kingdom Hearts! I 'spcially love the whole part about Sephiroth being put back in Jenova mode. AWESOME.
Winged Scythe
2009-06-24 . chapter 11
Cameo by Harley, Cid tearing up and setting doilies out with his tea, Sora going on with the Saw obsession... /Excellent/. I definitely like what you did with the words and that you used ideas few people would first think of. Amazing job!
Riku-Rocks
2009-04-28 . chapter 10
This was a rather funny set. I was especially amused by Concupiscent, Deflate, and Marooned. Hanker and Vagabond were quite intriguing as well.
It was pretty clear that Laguna and Elena are unfamiliar to the author, but Rinoa was all right for the most part, and Dr Finklestien was great. I especially liked Sephiroth's dark or dry humour in these.
The words and concepts in this set are excellent. There seems to be a missing word near the end of Umpire, but the grammar is pretty solid beyond that, and the pacing is great.
Xejicka
2009-04-28 . chapter 10
This reminds me that I need to make my own list. You were good on the characters, not far off. It does make me wish you used Laguna, but I won't force the research on you.

Now I want to say this before I go. *inhales* OEDIPUS COM- *impaled by masamune*
Sassy Aloo
2009-04-26 . chapter 10
Wasn't horrible. Easy to see you had some trouble wrangling some of them to obey you, but it was okay.

I loved the Oedipus thing.
Xejicka
2009-03-04 . chapter 9
What I could actually imagine is a therapy session with Riku and the remnants. Riku would be the therapist. There would be much verbal and physical abuse. Riku would be the violent type when dealing with them, I would imagine.

*snickers about Loveless* Yes, the Gullwings would be the infanous theives of the book! XD
alexandrea
2009-03-02 . chapter 9
alright, I loved anacond a and zoolology. you understood the words and used them well.
Winged Scythe
2009-03-02 . chapter 9
I like the humor in this one, and Die is definitely my favorite just because I can totally see it happening.
Xejicka
2009-01-10 . chapter 8
Sometimes I wish you could expand these.

The succubus cracked me up. It would be funny if someone accused Sephiroth or Riku of being an incubus.

I also liked Blissom. I love the Axel/Larxene pairing only for the reason that I find red heads being molested hilarious. I don't know why.
Sudden Change of Heart
2009-01-09 . chapter 8
You're still too hard on yourself - this list is great. I'd pick Azure, Blissom (I have to admit to having no idea what the word means, but I love what you do with it nevertheless!), El Dorado, Nosedive, Pastel, Wolfish and Zephyr. Wolfish does in fact make you (I mean, me; I mean, the reader) grin :-) Of all of them, Pastel comes out top by a whisker.
Sassy Aloo
2009-01-08 . chapter 8
Tee hee! That had to be my favorite list... maybe for a biased reason but oh well.

THE RUSSIANS SHALL PREVAIL!!

My favorites were Azure, Blissom, Jedi, Music, Nosedive, Tinker, Wolfish, and Zephyr. Overall favorite was Tinker.

Tinky... ;_; *sniffle*

I loves'd it!!
Eli Dohe
2008-12-09 . chapter 7
I absolutely adore Irvine in this. 8D
Sassy Aloo
2008-12-01 . chapter 7
That one was lots of fun... poor Irvine... you weren't very nice to him this round of it.

Favorite was Loll.
Winged Scythe
2008-12-01 . chapter 7
Coalition and Discomfit are probably my favorites out if this entire list. I woke my mom, I was laughing so hard. Although, there were a lot of a good ones, even if I don't quite get Mongoose and Vice.
Stellar Eclipse
2008-11-30 . chapter 7
Hee, really liked this set. :D Abdicate was just awesome, Discomfit made me laugh, and Isolate...yeah, that seemed very fitting. Vice...kinda scares me. XD And aw, Grunt just hurt. ;-; Poor Cloud.
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