Concerning that it came from the mind of someone, but well written at least...

one of the greatest stories ever! Loved it.

o.m.g.

that was soooooo cool!

I loved it! It was kinda scary from time to time but still awesome!

And i love the way you write!XDDDDD(triple thumbs up!)

um good story, it was very well written, but around chapters 4 and 5 i started feeling sick. Is that normal? Or is it just me? especially the end of 5.

this is really ...weird.. no offense

I've only read the first chapter so far, and I have one thing to say: Do NOT take this down! From just this introduction I can see how well written it is, and I've been waiting to an Ikarishipping fanfic where Paul wasn't totally OOC. This is great!

(And don't worry, this stuff floats around everyone's head, only a few people actually admit it.)

Um...a little too violent?

sorry,

earlymorninglight12

Now this is dark. And a good story.

Wow, that was totally awesome! Mainly because it was IC Ikarishipping. Really! That was great.

I loved both the style of the prose and how each of the characters "danced" around each other in that game. You nailed them. Honestly, I've always thought that Dawn liked it rough. And Paul wouldn't give anything...stunningly perfect. Every bit of it.

Great job, Q. I can't wait to read more, even though you don't want me to. -pinches cheek-

Au revoir, my leetl were-wolf

"MAY HE THUNDER FOREVER!"

Blake

Oh wow. That was great! That was truly amazing, and dark, and intense, and the short sentences! I love them. But real love, not the broken twisted kind... You're really good at the short sentences! *sigh* You make it look so easy.

If I was half as good a writer as you, I'd have won a ribbon or something. .

Just to sum, you did a great job and it's going on my favorites!

And I've never ever liked Ikarishipping. Ever. I despise the shipping, but this story made me love it! It's so evil... xP

Great job again!

Grassy

I love you, and I love your story. It's hot. Like seriously, it's hot. It's hot tamale train worthy. Just the detail, even with the staccattoness of it all. Whoa, I just killed the Italian language. Point is, it's hot and I love it.

Awesome. It actually squicked me when Ash got involved, oddly enough. I just can't picture that boy having sex...(lawls, and then I write sex scenes with him. Go figs.) But yes, this was pretty awesome.

I actually fell in love with this story. It rocks. No other writer would write a story like this. Bet you feel pretty happy. :) I LOVE twisted stories. This is one of them.

-Pwnful Chaotic Dork

A dedication? I'm so honored. XD

And it's done. And even though I say this all the time, this was a really great story, and I liked it from start to finish. I also think that this last chapter tied everything up well, especially the last scene. I feel happy for Dawn, she finally got what she really wanted.

The whole 'Pain. Pleasure...Falling. Ecstacy' part was brilliant, I think. And oh, can't forget to mention the little part with Ash near the start of this-quite enjoyed that too.

So pretty much, so much love for this! I said this before (I think), but it's because of this story that actually made me NOT hate Ikarishipping all that much anymore. ...Well really, I like it now. Hehe, of course, I LOVE it if it's written in a dark style, like this.

Thanks for making my day!

ASK

You know what, I loved this fic... for some reason, amd trust me, I hate dark fics... Newayz, you should serious;y consider writing a sequel to this...