Wow, that was so sad, and it's not an aspect of the story that gets written about a lot either. I really feel sorry for his dad now...and kind of for Kira too. It was really moving. Also I'm a sucker for biblical references in my angsty fiction. XD

I've only recently gotten into Angel Sanctuary, and this is the best fic I've found so far. Really good job!

Good characterization...*head tilt, thoughtful smile*

*nods in approval*

That was an interesting read to say the least (don't take that in a bad way). I just have nothing to really compare this story too, because this is the first non-smut AS story I've read.

However, I really like how you characterized Kira. You kept him in the way his dad would see him. Also, another interesting thing about your piece is it was from Kira's father's perspective.

Nice job.

I like the way you write about kira. Good fic