 inconstant heart 2008-07-19 . chapter 1Lovely. I've been reading the other stories you've posted here, and I think this one is my favourite. All of your pieces explore each character realistically and accurately, but this one is absolutely spot-on, in my opinion. You've captured Viletta perfectly: her struggle to hate Ohgi/Ougi and remain a devoted *Britannian* in every sense, but not quite able to do it convincingly.
The last three lines are beautiful. This might be one of the best CG stories I've read. |