Omg this is good! Sugoi!

Aw, that's it? Really? Since you haven't updated since November, I can only assume that you're not going to continue this. And it's on a cliffhanger too!

Ah, well, I just wanted to let you know that I really enjoyed your story. Thanks for writing it.

Love it. Can't wait for the next battle.

Please, please you have to update this.

yes MB i'm talking to you.

you are evil and left us with a dam cliffhanger.

don't forget us, your readers that are waiting for an update.

Take care and write.

MB, I demand that you explain how I missed this story when I went through your profile and read your stuff!

D:

In any case, I love it~. Keep it up. xD


-Tari

So, you want reviews? You wish to drink deep of that solitary cup of reciprocation that we you write this site can achieve. Ja, I see.

This tale has great makings. Some of these tales are interesting, other are not and a great many on this site are scheisse.

Then there are the few that make the entire business worth the effort. Jewels in the sty, tales that you wish coul;d enjoy the noptoriety bestowed on art that is far less worthy. Such tales tend to be produced by writers that realize the enemy of greatness is "good enough."

I give you this review because this tale deserves it and because I have seen lesser works given far more reviews. That cannot be allowed, jewels should sparkle, not laze in the the dark.

Already the lines diverge, the butterfly flags its wings and spawns a storm of alternatives. When a confession is given it can never be taken back. They are perhaps on a road to redemption, like Dante's hell emerging from the abyss to stand beneath a startry sky, their self made chains shattered.

That alone would fascinate when mixed with the intricaties of the series. Yet you promise more. A true metamorphisis, the evolution of the soul reflected in the flesh mayhap? You know I have never understood the conflict between evolution and creationism. I study God's divine craftsmenship and am awed by its lack of completion that Eloheims design is not static like a mortal work of art but progessing to heights beyond comprehenaion from the sub atomic mysteries tio the unknown borders of the universe.

Oh dear another tangent, better stop now before I get further off.

Looking forward to more.

come on, update. you left us in cliffhanger.

this is a very good story and i hope that you can continue

I've always loved stories in which the Children gradually are altered by their connection to the Evangelions, and yours is one of the best I've seen.

A very interesting story idea! And richly explored as well. I eagerly await future chapters.

Great story so far, keep it going.

Holy Sweet Mercenaries' Guild. This chapter is full of win and win.

nice ^^

good chapter, i guess character development is a necessary thing.

i just hope the next one comes out sooner, but then again, i always hope the next chapters come out sooner

another great chapter. i can't wait until you fully explain what's going on with Asuka, Shinji, and Rei. that's one hell of a plot device, i'll give ya that

I remember reading the first chapter of this a few months ago, and I thought to myself, "This story has promise." And it seems I was correct.

After reading all of the story up to this point in succession, I must say it is quite excellent. The style in which you show the character's thoughts and personalities is quite amazing. Few stories present it this well, so I will make sure to continue checking in on this story until it comes to conclusion.